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The Killer Legacy


Just a normal brazilian brony who starts writing stories after a dream he had.

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Tenerius lived alone in a house, he always drew diapered ponies and cartoon charcters like Gumball for his own and his followers pleasure. Then one day a pen he had requested some time ago came to him, so he finnaly could make real life drawings, or that is what he thought...

All thanks go to the original owner of the OC Tenerius, FillyScoots42 for accepting and authotizing this fanfic.

Warning: This story contains: baby stuff, diapers, wetting, messing, shipping, cuteness and a conflict between two worlds. If you don't are ready for these things, please do not read this story.

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Comments ( 10 )

Good so far

Comment posted by Darkentrophy deleted Apr 6th, 2016

I can tell English isn't your first language, you should study it more. The grammar and spelling was atrocious. Otherwise, write whatever you want to write, don't let others stop you. :D

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Thanks! :pinkiesmile: By the way, what your thought about the story?

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And Yeah... I already noticed some grammar reclamations, so I got an editor.

7101322 I don't know, I'll follow it for now but it may not be my cup of tea :applejackunsure:

Story gave me a good laugh. Yes, in a good way. While it is a bit obvious English isn't your first language, your sentences are structured quite well. Definitely take some time to work on your grammar, and perhaps hop into a thesaurus at some point and stop reusing the same words all the time. :twilightsmile:

Looking forward to what you write next! :heart:

looking forward to see more.

I am loving this story! The grammar needs a lot of work, to a point where it's a little hard to pay attention, but I love it anyway! Please continue this story!

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