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Midnight Shadows


Been a member since 2012, never realized there was a bio line until the end of 2018, I TAKE WRITING COMMISSIONS! :D lol. I don't do roleplays.

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Wow. I can’t believe I’m the first to comment on this one. Anyway, I really enjoyed this story. :) What I liked most was when they made up. I think Rarity sometimes forgets what it’s like to be Sweetie’s age, and their conversation, along with time Rarity spent taking on the role of the little sister for a change really helped both of them understand how each other feels. It would be great to hear how the rest of the time went while their parents were on vacation, but something tells me that Rarity and Sweetie got along just fine. :)

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Thanks! Yeah, the main challenge with this story was getting their dynamic right without making it seem forced, especially with how much development they have together in the show. I personally find it a bit hard to capture Rarity properly, she's one of the harder characters to write in my opinion (Though not as hard to write as Pinkie lol) Again it means a lot that you're enjoying our stories!

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