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Yosh-E-O


I am aspiring author who enjoys writing various works of fantasy in which have a cutesy touch

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This story is a sequel to Pinkie 'swaddle' Pie


Learning of all the stressed ponies who find peace in being 'Forever Foals' has really given the childish party pony a new way to feel accepted for who she is along with tons of ideas for helping the mares and stallions of Equestria unwind without fear of judgment for taking a break from the stress of everyday life.

Unfortunately a mix-up in sending out party invitations brings her family to discover her 'foal' side and they aren't too happy about it.

Then there is a Pinkie Pie Clone who is mistaken for Pinkie Pie herself by a more-than-eager family believing their actual daughter has forsaken her odd behavior because they told her to.

This story picks up where "Pinkie 'Swaddle' Pie" left off in showing the importance of loving yourself while being understanding of others. Diapers and foal behavior are not the highlights of this tale as much as self-discovery and keeping an open mind. The "Teen" rating is for how 'Forever Foal' concepts are mentioned along with family drama.

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COMMISSION FOR:
The Lord Insanity

ART USED WITH PERMISSION BY:
FillyScoots42

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 13 )

This is a very interesting start. Really leaves you on a cliffhanger like one of those soap operas. What will happen next? Only the next chapter will tell...

Like where this story is going.

Reading from the perspective of two different Pinkie Pie's is really interesting. It's like having two sides of a coin.

Can't wait to see where this goes!

Things are starting to escalate.

A confrontation is inevitable.

I'm hooked.

I honestly don't know what else to say.
Keep up the good work.

Great way to end the story!

I'm glad the clone got a happy ending too. It would be kinda sad if she was banished just for existing.

It's so sweet that Mr. and Mrs. Cake are so accepting of this lifestyle of Pinkie Pie's.

So glad to see Twilight and Starlight getting involved.

“Are you sure we need to banish the clone?” worried Starlight. “It kind of seems unfair as, well, she doesn’t seem to be pretending to be Pinkie for any other reason than to feel loved.”

What is it with these ponies and solving every mundane problem through banishment?

Kind of feel like Pinkie would take off the foal things, but I can see her being so stressed about the mix-up that she forgot to do so.

Even given how stotic she tends to be, I really think Maud would at least try to stand up for her sister more. She values Pinkie's happiness, and we've already seen that she'll go to great lengths that are against her own self interests if she thinks it'll make her sister happy.

Clever of Maud to be the one to sense Clone Pinkie.

9146550 Considering they're practically a second family to her and they've seen her do far weirder things, it probably doesn't take much for them to accept that it's another side of her. Heck, in a lot of ways, Pinkie already acts kind of like an AB with her child like innocence to the world.

Not entirely sure why Twilight and Starlight need to be involved in this.

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