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Zubric


Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.

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On the night of Mothers Day, A special dream is given to the parents of the Elements of Harmony. Each being able to experience when their children were all foals happy and carefree.

contains regression and foal like themes but mostly harmless cute fun. Just rated it teen to be on the safe side.
Cover art used with permission by : EvilFrenzy
Co-writer: Foal Star

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 37 )

This is so adorable. I love Padded spike! :twilightsmile:

This was kind of adorable, not gonna lie. Wish it was more fleshed out though. :heart:

I'm curious what you'll do when it comes to Pear Butter's chapter. :trixieshiftright:

Adorable and cute. But I noticed one error, Shining is supposed to be the older sibling. Why is he younger than Twilight here?
Still great story, I want to see what you do with Pear Butter.

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NOt os much an error as just a choice we made. I mean it is a dream, so why stick with reality..

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I figured that much, but still I think Velvet would like to have it that way. Still I enjoyed it a lot. Let's see what you have for the rest of the Mane 6

cute, keep it up.

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As for pear butter I’d have to think on that one. But I mean she is alive in their hearts and memories of her so who’s to say that can’t be used by Luna to make a mother for the night

MJP

:trollestia:fet-ish sto-ry:trollestia:

you know maybe you should include scootaloo with rainbow they may not be sisters but hay it could work.

8963407 My thoughts exactly, especially since Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle have mothers to play with, why should Scootaloo be left out?

You might want to consider proofreading and spellchecking your work. It gets difficult to understand sometimes, and I don't mean the baby babble, though that's an entirely different issue.

So, will Big Macintosh, Applejack, and Apple Bloom with Pear Butter be next?

ooo or pinkie limestone muad and the other pies:pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by inconspicuous_brony deleted Jun 18th, 2018

Kind of expected Pinkie to put up more of a struggle with her mane, or for it to just poof back to its curly state.

Gonna do one for spike and celestia?

do fluttershy next i bet she will be hiding behind animals alot

The Apple Family's chapter should be interesting. I was not expecting Discord to show up here. :rainbowderp:

I thought Applejack's parents were dead.

9005347 They are, but Luna was able to conjure up a mental projection of Pear Butter for the dream.

It's just perfect

That was an adorable twist ending. Any chance we could get a sequel of Celestia and Luna continuing the treatment? :rainbowkiss:

I loved this story so much thanks for letting help make it.

I want a story where luna is a a mom or adleast pregnant

Please don't tell me I'm the only one that read "pwusies" wrong

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How exactly did their parents die in canon? Was it due to Timberwolves?

gah the cuteness, very interesting story though ;)

what a great story, nice job :)

scootsy and rainbow are next, to be honest, I like scoots, as much as fluttershy

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