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DougtheLoremaster


You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster

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It's the Era of Friendship, two millennia have passed since the mane seven brought everlasting harmony to Equestria. Time has moved on and their exploits and acts of heroism have faded into legends. Now join their descendants in 6 individual storytimes with Luna and Celestia as the descendants discover who their ancestors are, what they stood for and how they too have a destiny.

Along the way, Celestia and Luna must confront their past as well. Will they improve themselves by accepting the truth or will they succumb to their own despair? Two thousand years have passed...yet the pain never left, watching those they treasured lowered into the ground. Can they finally stop grieving and see the light as they face the shadows of their own fears and regrets? With everyone else living in perfect harmony and balance...can the alicorn princesses finally move on?

As Celestia and Luna learn lessons from beyond, questions arise. Why are the mane seven reappearing? Aren't these ponies part of the ethereal? If they no longer walk among those of Equestria, how is it they are being seen and even talked to? More importantly how does Celestia's Daughter, Starshine tie into all this? Is she responsible or could it be something else is at work here?

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Comment posted by DougtheLoremaster deleted Jul 2nd, 2018

Please let me know your thoughts as this is my first attempt and I would love to know what you liked, as well as receive constructive criticism as to what you may not have enjoyed so much. Please list chapter and issue you may have whatever it may be. This is currently a work in progress and I plan to release a chapter every 1-2 weeks as I am working on it 2 hrs a day.

Part 2 of Starshine's Storytime is now officially up and posted. Please feel free to give me any thoughts you may have on it.

Starshine's storytime-part three is now up! please enjoy! Will Twilight learn the most important of friendship lessons? Can Starlight convince her to give Trixie forgiveness? Read on to find out!

The thrilling conclusion to Starshine's Storytime, Part Four is now up! Please enjoy! Feel free to comment if you wish and remember there are 5 more storytimes to go. Coming soon, the epic quest to cheer up a forlorn nightmare as told by Princess Luna to a certain pink earth pony's descendant.

Bubblegum's storytime Part One is now up. Please enjoy!

Bubblegum's storytime-part two is taking longer than I expected but should be out by Friday.

Bubblegum's Storytime- Part Two is now published and ready to read! Please enjoy!

The final part of Bubblegum's storytime is now up and published, Enjoy! next up is none other than the wonderbolt's descendant, herself! Hopefully, you are all as excited as I am to see what happens!

Claire and Skyflare's Storytime- Part One is now finished and up! Please enjoy! As always feel free to post your thoughts.

This arc is..... Beautiful :pinkiehappy:
The moral is great, and using Pinkie and Luna is just PERFECT. I also like how Bubblegum is just as random as the pink, little colt made me like him :pinkiesmile:

If I have to nitpick... The part with Celestia and Starshine is a bit... abrupt. Maybe if you put it at the end of the arc, or in a single chapter before the next arc, it would've composed the storytelling better.

You wrote Pinkie and Luna well, and personally I feel this arc is better then the first. Keep 'em going :twilightsmile:

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I am so glad you liked it! this was by far the hardest arc to make. I see your point about Celestia and Starshine...hmmm...maybe at the end of the chapter would work better...story within a story after all. I thought placing it there would be a good mood shift, I will work on that! thank you for your feedback!

The second chapter of Claire and Skyflare's story time is now up! Please enjoy!

Claire and Skyflare's Storytime- nopony left behind is now up and ready to read. Please enjoy!

The final chapter of Claire and Skyflare's Storytime is now up and proudly published. Letting Go Can Be Hard is now available to read. Please enjoy! Up next everyone's favorite applebucker and dressmaker's descendants teach Celestia something she once knew but forgot since that day.

Chapter one of the new story arc is up and ready to read; Celestial Distress. It seems Celestia's despair has affected more than just her state of mind this time.

What is Celestia going to do? Why does Twilight seems insistent on her going to the Apple farm? The mystery is beginning to unravel so read on dear viewer. Applespice and Bolt's Storytime: Unbalanced Harmony is now up and published.

please bear with me the latest chapter of the applespice and bolt arc is taking slightly longer than I anticipated but I only want to give the best quality I can. I promise I will publish it soon as I am able. projected date is within next seven days quite possibly sooner.

Bolt and Applespice's Story time - Apple Pie is now officially up and published. Please enjoy! When Starshine talks of seeing a strange filly by an old statue, Bolt, Applespice and Celestia seem rather concerned...but why? Could it be the reason for the abandonment of harvesting Sweet Apple Acres? Read on!

Applespice and Bolt's Storytime - "her fate is in your hooves" is now officially up and published. Please enjoy. Starshine finds herself in a particularly curious situation. The mystery surrounding her is slowly unraveling...stay tuned. In the next chapter Celestia may just learn something she never considered from two very special ponies.

Applespice and bolt's storytime- "What truly defines family"
Update:
Will be delayed due to me currently being sick from a cold, Please stay tuned for a release of the next chapter within a week or so. Sorry for the delay.

Apple Spice and Bolt's Storytime When a lie becomes the truth -Part One is now officially up and published please enjoy.

I changed the title name because i felt it was more appropriate for the story being potrayed in this arc.

Sorry all for the lack of progress I have been suffering major writer's block and so I have been unable to complete any new content for a couple weeks now. Do not worry I have begun writing once more and estimation is by friday for the second to last chapter in this book. Thank you all for your patience and support~

a few minutes past the projected release but part two: When a lie becomes the truth is now officially published and stick around for the third and possibly final installment of this story arc...what have the sisters been hiding? Find out next time!
Enjoy~

It's finally up, all the build up has led to this, the final storytime. What the future may hold, the final storytime is now up and ready to read. Please enjoy~
this was an amazing process. A lot of sleepless nights, many hours coordinating thoughts with my friends, grammar and spell checking my work, and all the support from my readers. Thank you.
A huge shoutout to Pink Wolf and Statizkyz for all their help and patience as I badgered them about flow and form, sending them multiple versions of the same paragraph hundred's of times to get it right~
I do have plans for a sequel. So be on the lookout for that~

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

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Well in the story, Starshine is 8 years old for most of it. I would say mostly a sweet, semi high toned voice, just a hint of squeakiness.
her adult form would portray a voice similiar to a slightly deeper Twilight.
Serenity would sound...chaotic. slightly unhinged during certain points, but mostly put together.
It would depend on the situation...in all honestly.
Bubblegum would be sugarrush in speech, like his mother
Claire would be rebelious and annoyed at being mollicoddled.
Skyflare would be proud like magnus in tone
Apple pie and Applespice would have a southern accent
Bolt would sound a bit like Rarity maybe an octave higher.

BRAVO!!!! IT WAS WONDERFUL, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! ^^ /)

This is.... I don't know what to say..... This is beautiful!! :fluttercry::raritystarry: Thank-you so much for sharing this with the rest of us! :twilightsmile:

Please continue!

NOOOO!!! I NEED MORE!! MORE!! :fluttercry::raritycry:

What a beautiful story!! Thank you soo much for sharing this with the rest of us!!

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It continues in Thestral With The Golden Halo. Also I'm glad you enjoyed this!

"One was to ask" Trixie gulped and took a visibly deep breath before continuing, "for your blessing in taking Starlight's hoof as my somepony. The second -" Twilight interrupted at that point: "You've come here tonight after many years of chaos to ask me for such a favor? You; the pony who demeaned, humiliated, abused and embarrassed me on top of shunning any kindness or compassion I attempted to give? Do you dare to approach me for a personal favor? Why do you want my blessing anyway? Starlight is a grown mare! Do what you want! You have never cared for my opinion before and frankly, I am tired of trying and failing to offer it to you. Get out, now!"

Trixie saw the look on Twilights face as the wings flared wide open and realized she had no chance. She rose and tears streaming from her eyes bolted from the crystalline castle. As she did, a voice behind Twilight said softly: "are you alright? Twilight, I heard shouting."Turning her head, the princess relaxed her wings as her face took on a warm expression."I am fine, my faithful student," she replied tonelessly. It was obvious she was hiding the truth. Starlight stepped from the shadows and sat down next to her greatest idol on the couch, offering her a chalice of Sweetmilk from Sugarcube Corners before speaking up. "Would you mind if I talked to you, Princess?"

Ughhhhh the most important rule of dialogue broken... I need to go bleach my eyes now.
Ugh, I should have known that first stories aren't always good grammar wise... well anything wise.
Anyways so far I like this story and wonder where it will go.

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Do keep in mind this was the first story i ever wrote for this site. I have been told my writing has improved since then. The material however is all based on my own life. What I've seen and done; twisted into a more enjoyable tale for my readers.

Then again, when I have time I might go back through and edit it.

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Yeah, I know. I plan to go through this story sometime later today if I can't find anything else to read or mark for later. There is a story I know that tbh start off horrible... When not like bad bad but compared to later chapter is pretty bad. I guess https://www.fimfiction.net/story/437915/the-equestrian-odyssey-a-tale-of-two-worlds is a prime example to getting better as time goes on.

tbh when comparing this story to some others I've seen, those stories would make this story a master piece.

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While grammar has never been my forte, After this book I started using a grammar checker. My autism (not a joke) makes it hard for me to grasp the concept. Though the speaking parts...yeah I agree, though I am glad you can see past that to the actual content. I wrote this (as well as subsequent stories) for therapy reasons; psychiatrist suggested it would help my PTSD. After this book however, I realized how happy it made me and just how much it relieved my stress, and so I got a bit more serious about my writing.

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I'm glad that you made stories you enjoy doing!:twilightsmile: For me if it's grammar I really don't care as long as it not as bad as one story I came across where it honestly made it near impossible to understand the story let alone what it was trying to tell us.

For now, going off of what I've seen(for description and first two chapters) so far I think it's going be a pretty good story.

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