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Angelic Chorus was an average young filly from her hometown on the edge of the Badlands. At least she was until her entire home was massacred by a necromantic blight leaving her a twisted wreck with little hope of survival. Yet due to the intervention of the incarnation of death himself she was saved and now lives only to avenge her hometown with the very powers that were used to destroy it.

Tags subject to change as chapters are released. Updates whenever other stories won't cooperate.

Takes place after Tirek but before Starlight.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 49 )

Grade A+ work. Must see more:pinkiecrazy:

Oh hell yes this looks so good.

You have my attention. I shall be watching.:twilightsmile:

 blight leaving hear skin

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So the filly came across Starlight's town? I wonder if the mare was Starlight herself, if so... RIP Starlight.

great chapter loving where this is going

Very interesting...

Do continue. I'd be delighted to see more:raritywink:

Excellent, can't wait for more

I love this ty so much for writing a good necromancer story.

AWESOME chapter, really great to see this story is still alive.

You actually were able to fix here eyes
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Wow. That filly really doesn't know how not to freak ponies out, does she?

Good good good? Gods I love this story

Necromancers appear to have sacrificed the social.

She certainly knows how to make a first impression.

My guess?

It's daddy dearest and Celly has been a naughty filly XD

its the alicorn of death isn't it.

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Oh it is so much worse than that. :pinkiecrazy:

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Oh my sweet goddess!!!!!!!!!!

I can't stop laughing and there was so much info dumped and stuff happened, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc, etc.....................................


THERE IS SO MUCH GOING ON AND I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING XD HELP MEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Huh a little clustered and anoyyed we did not get a name but shoker at the end

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Trust me, it's gonna be worse for a couple chapters. Actually cut out(ie forgot) a small bit hinting at the origins of the alicorn siblings until later. Or at least a silly idea for it. :derpytongue2:

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No name? I'm pretty sure I dropped one in there, may have gotten a bit buried in the cluster, but really the situation is one big cluster-:yay: right now. :pinkiecrazy:

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You gave a grandpa name but i have seen before that its used as a nickname not a real name

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Couple paragraphs after he wines about the name he wants to use. :derpytongue2:

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Oh so clustered i thought some one else said it

WHAT A TWIST! Twilight is Scootaloo's MOM! This has time travel written all over it.

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Oh isn't that cute, you think it's going to be something as simple as that and not complicated at all. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: Hint: Scootaloo's aunts will make an appearance, but the story the filly was told isn't fully true, one key detail is a lie. :pinkiecrazy:

“Well at least this time they were easy to escape. I barely even had to try to get away, they were so slow. I wonder if had anything to do with that strange cutie mark they all had?” The filly pondered a bit before she shook her head.

It wouldn't have happend to have been an equal sign would it ? :trixieshiftright:

Looks interesting so far :twilightsmile:

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Brother, actually.
In the prologue this was written

The stallion looked back at his young passenger before turning towards the rising moon and the face of the mare it held.

“Well little sis. It seems that the foul ones rise once again.

“Not you, her. Their magical frequencies line up perfectly.” All eyes follow the filly's hoof until they land on the surprised and confused figure of Twilight Sparkle.

“WHAT!?”

My reaction exactly Twilight :moustache:

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Time travel... is simple......... that's it i'm done, good night everybody :pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by Enderdragonslayer1 deleted May 31st, 2018

Another brilliant chapter I love the twist this story has taken with who the parents of the Crusaders are. I'm really looking forward to the drama that's probably going to happen between Scootaloo, Sunset, and Twilight. I mean if I was in Scoot's position to say I would be very emotionally hurt is a understatement. I mean one of her parents not only abandoned her but pretty much forgot about her, there's really not a way you can spin that in a light or funny way.

Twiset for the ship! :trollestia:

Needs a bit of editing, but sounds interesting.

Did she just cause Starlight an inconvenience?

That was unexpected. :D

You didn't know that the one hat murdered my home town lives right under your nose?!

that murdered. Hats can't commit crimes. :D

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: That was awesome. But what happened to Luna and why is she cute?

Typo:

allow me into their stores to but stuff

you said but instead of buy.

Ooooookaay...
Needs editing, first off. Lots of typos, repeated words, etc.

That was sorta creepy, actually.
And has Discord been punished for any of this?!

Though Angel complaining that it didn't work is a nice bit of squick that had me laughing uproariously.

Item Earned: Rune of Craft Disturbing Mental Image +2.

This was surprisingly fun! The flow is a bit random, it woudl serve the story well to be in longer chunks, but meh, small potatoes. Have a fav, sir ^.^

“Ms. Dash! Please get down from there!” The rainbow-maned pegasus glared down at the doctor from her position hanging from the lights. Her blackened wings dangled lifelessly below her as she swatted a hoof at a broom reaching for her.

... is she a cat or something :trixieshiftright:

Holiday sighed as she watched her wife stomp away and left her seat to see just who it was that incited the pegasus' temper. She expected to find a salespony or someone else that her wife didn't like outside of her door, but to find Princess Celestia rubbing her reddened nose was the last thing she had expected. Frowning at the sight, she looked back over her shoulder towards the kitchen where she heard pots and pans rattling around violently.

If she got hit on the nose, it means she tried to enter the house before getting invited in :trixieshiftleft:

Fresnor.... You are a mad, sadistic genius. I've been waiting for a long time for more updates....

I need my fix, dude:raritydespair:

Brilliant chapter.

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That is a good point.

Also,

MORE :flutterrage:

:trixieshiftright: Ahhhhh Santa Barbara oh how i miss thee!!!:pinkiecrazy:

:trixieshiftleft: I now wonder with whom Trixie has family ties:twilightsmile:

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