An adolescent, and starving, Changeling Princess has captured Princess-to-be Cadence, and on the night she was supposed to start foalsitting, too. Cadence refuses to feed her love until the job is done. Chrysalis knows what she needs to do.
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funny interpretation. I would like to see more stories in this universe.
P.S. It turns Celestia wrote a story where he and his sister were swapped?
I love how this is a somewhat regular thing, like a "Same time next week?" type of deal.
And that ending, who needs Cadance's love when you got an adorable filly?
Huh, that went much better than expected. Who would have thought it, Chrysalis has a real gift for this.
adorable i love stories with cute lil filly twilight <3 the comedy just made it better!
Sequel! Longfic sequel! You did well enough with this that I’d really enjoy seeing how the rest of this ‘verse goes!
Ahh this was so cute! I'd love to see how this au develops!
okay yeah I need more please lol
Okay, that was adorable. Would love to see a sequel that ether continues this or explores how this version of Chrysalis and Cadence meet.
This is adorable
cute well written little fic, although how the hay did Chryssie pull that off :P
and if she'd just remembered the shake dance for later Equestria would be under her heel by now. Silly changeling queen.
The one thing that worries me is that when Cadance was playing herself up as a meal it made it sound like Eros rather than Phileo she was discussing. Might I inquire what your authorial intention was Doug the Loremaster?
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Love is love, after all...
As far as we know, Erotic love is like a full course meal it a fancy restaurant, while phileo is like a giant pot full of warm, homemade stew.
Both will leave you satisfied, but they are fundamentally different.
Also, seeing the attitude of her mother. none of these are the usual feeding methods, but chrysalis is bending the rules to keep interacting with cadance. Maybe she got tired of fast-food-like stolen love.
Now all we need is an A.U. follow-up story where Chryssy has always been Twilight's foalsitter.
By the way...
The word is undulate. It would be slightly horrific otherwise.
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oops, fixed.
What an interesting idea. I would love to see this scenario explored in future stories. :)
simply adorable, really great story
Most!
This needs a full story.
Chrysalis and Cadance switching who does "Cadance's" work for the day. Maybe both dating Shining; without him knowing.
Chrysalis feeding the whole Hive off of Twilight's love for books, and Cadnace's and Shining's love for her.
That was adorable. I'll repeat those that have said they want more of this 'verse. Not only would I love to see how Cady and Chrissy met and interacted the first time, but it'd be great to see future babysitting gigs. I like 11243913's idea of the two of them swapping each one.
And then, once Cadance was freed again, she practiced the secret hoofshake with Twilight. And a few years later, A Canterlot Wedding (Season 2 Finale) happened.
If Chrysalis would forget about the hoofshake after that story, this would fit the canon very well.
Good story, mate. Definetly gets a fav from me.
An oddball ghost happened across your fic and read it. Have a review!
Oh now I see what this "torture" is. Cadence you sly, kinky bastard
cadence seducing Chrysalis because she thinks she has to and it's easy, also clearly she would bring chrysi into her relationship with shining if she thought she could get away with it
LOVE it!
I like how Chryssi is actually smart and skilled at her job in this!