Shining has secretly befriended a certain Queen of the Changelings.
Turns out she's just a harmless nerd.
Now if only his family and friends would put down the torches and pitchforks.
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I'm no passing fancy, you know. 🍀🌸
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No. No. No. I did not read that. No no no no no! SHINING ARMOUR!!! Oh my when Cadance finds out she's going to be so mad...
This is... a thing. I think I like this, but I'm not sure...
Let us see where it goes!
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Yes... Yes she is.
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Might wanna slow the pacing a wee bit, but all and all i like the premise of your story of them being friends. I also could see Shining getting Spike to help by getting him into an O&O game with him, Chrissy and whoever else he (Shining) might trust to help.
"It's not a love story."
Ah, that explains it. I was wondering why there was no Romance Tag.
why are you writing stories about meeeeeeee
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This seems interesting, i think i'll keep an eye on this story.
I like the energy the two of them have. And you're good at portraying this kind of character. Keep an eye on your punctuation, though, and refresh yourself on the structure of sentences.
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I want a polyship! with all three of them!
I'm already wondering where all this will lead
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I know what the title says but... Damn do I ship it.
You had my interest. Now you have my attention. And my cat. And my feral man-eating chicken.
I'm going to need the chicken back, if you don't mind.
This was FAR cuter than I expected! I LIKE IT! ^_^
Ha
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I'm sure this will go perfectly without anything bad happening whatsoever.
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And thus they were jinxed.
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Adorable!
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I almost used that picture as the cover art, lol.
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Aww , ty!
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But it was so feral...fine.
~ Returns chicken reluctantly.~
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Refreshing now....crashes X_X
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She's on to me!
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Sounds adorable!
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Yes... It's Not A Love Story.
as soon as i saw the 'two number 9s' i knew and just lost it
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I was hoping somebody would appreciate the nod...
The entire premise of the story is sabotaged when you say that Chrysalis did infact invade Canterlot. You can't go saying she isn't evil only to mention her doing a canon evil scheme.
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Not saying she's not evil, she mugged a unconscious pony for one.
She's more on the fence about being diabolical, but willing to at least put some trust into Shining.
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bruh, i love Big Smoke memes. 'OOHHHHH'
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I know, I couldn't help myself but to sneak it in.
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a what now?
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Lol, Spike helping to set up a O&O game, sounds like a cute idea.
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I meant whats a big smoke meme? (I typically dont understand memes)
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“The same thing that makes us laugh, makes us cry” - BS
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Oh, well in GTA San Andreas, it's a old video game.
These friends go to a place called Cluckin Belle to eat.
They're supposed to order something quick because they are waiting for somebody to come out in the open.
Everybody orders like just a sandwich or wings, but Big Smoke orders a ton of food.
What Chrysalis ordered was Big Smokes Order.
It's like a couple not burgers, wings a large drink and a bucket of chicken I think, lol. In the GTA game.
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Lol
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ohhhh i see :)
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For some reason it took me until the "number 9 large" to notice
This is 💯% a love story
I'm really digging this story and look forward to more.
Now that was adorkably adorable and cutely nerdy. I loved it
Magic missile! Magic missile!
I wonder if any of the Chrysalis children share her geek interests?
or do they consider it just overseas and oddity and do not understand it? 🤔
The cover art made me think of this. https://youtu.be/riHgBEu3OSk?t=73
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Welcome!
.....Now when are we getting MOAR?
I can't get the idea of Chrysalis mugging everyone she meets now...
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Thorax whole heartedly... Pharanx is too tsundere to admit it
This works surprisingly well, and while a tad brief in this first outing it is still quite enjoyable.
I like that there's still some tension between them. Shiny knows she's still a bad person, but is coming to like her in spite of that and wants to try to provide a good influence on her. While Chrysalis is apparently only really looking at ponies as worthy of any consideration because of this young friendship, but is still happily villainous.
I stopped reading right here and started laughing uncontrollably. For this quote alone you have my track on this. And a follow, once I stop laughing and can keep reading.
I like it but I’m going to wait to favorite it. Don’t let us down!
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in addition to these two, her brood also contains a whole hive. :D
I feel like the world couldn't handle a whole race of geek nerds. XD
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Occelus is too young or too shy to admit it but then she interacts with Fluttershy and become an otaku