Loyalty Tested

by Secret_Shadows

Miracle

Loyalty Tested

Part IV

‘Miracle’

Written By: Secret_Shadows

Edited By: avorin

The rain was letting up, but that was the last thing Scootaloo was thinking of.

“What do I Do!” She mumbled to herself, still crying. The sun had set for the night and it was getting dark, there was still a lot of thunder and lightning.

‘If I don’t make it’ She thought.

“Rainbow, please, please, please wake up!” Scootaloo said, now huddled next to Rainbow for warmth.

“I’m sorry, Rainbow I’m so, so sorry, I am sorry I was annoying and followed you around, I am sorry that we are stuck here like this, just please, please wake up.” Scootaloo said.

Rainbow moaned, it was a good sign, she was still alive, but barely, her body was growing weaker every second, as was Scootaloo.

“Rainb-bow, y-you h-have to w-wake up” Scootaloo said, she was starting to get dizzy and disoriented, the cold and her injuries were affecting her, she closed her eyes slowly and reopened them.

“R-rainb-bow” She said before she closed her eyes and lost consciousness.

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Scootaloo’s eyes opened for a short moment, she saw a hazy and shadowy figure standing over her and dash, then she fell back under.

Scootaloo moaned, her eyes shot open, she was in a Strange place, it was some sort of tree, but, it was a house.

She managed to see a figure standing over Rainbow Dash.

“Rainbow” She moaned as she saw the figure come over to her.

“Have a blanket young filly, for it is very chilly” A figure said putting a blanket over Scootaloo.

Scootaloo recognised the figure as the strange cursed creature that comes to Ponyville every so often.

“Don’t Kill Me!” Scootaloo screached.

“I shall not kill, I will return you, to Ponyville” She said.

Scootaloo started to fade out again, and when her eyes opened, she was in a hospital bed with an IV strapped to her forehoof.

The faint sound of a beeping heart monitor was heard.

Scootaloo looked around to see Rainbow in a bed next to her.

“Rainbow?” Scootaloo said, Rainbow stirred in her bed before her eyes opened.

“Rainbow, where are we?” Scootaloo asked.

“What, oh, I, I think we are in a hospital.” Rainbow said, she was still weak, but better than before.

“Well, duh” Scootaloo said as Nurse Redheart walked in.

“Ah good, you’re both awake, you gave us quite the scare, it was touch and go there for a little while, but it seems you both managed to pull through” She said

“What happened?” Rainbow asked.

“Well, a strange creature dropped you and Scootaloo off at the hospital late a few nights ago and said she had found you in the Everfree during that awful storm, we tried to ask her name but she left in a hurry."

“Thats strange” Scootaloo said.

“Wait, a few nights, how long” Rainbow asked.

“About 2 weeks” Redheart said.

“TWO WEEKS! But the Wonderbolts-” Rainbow tried to get up out of bed and was cut off by Redheart.

“No, no, no Rainbow, you aren’t going anywhere for a good 2 weeks” She said.

“But!” Rainbow protested.

“No buts Rainbow Dash, you both are going to be in here for the next two weeks so you’d better get used to each other.” She said as she left the room.

Scootaloo smiled, she got to spend the entire week with Rainbow.

Rainbow looked back at Scootaloo and gave a weak smile.

“Thank you” Rainbow said.

“For what?” Scootaloo asked.

“For saving me, if you hadn’t found me, I would probably be laying dead out there right now” She said.

“Rainbow, I only wanted to help the person I look up to.”

With that Rainbow frowned a little bit.

Scootaloo’s ears fell and she looked down.
“Oh, well, If you don’t want to see me ever aga-” Rainbow cut her off.

“Now why would you say that, It was undeniably, unquestionably, awesome that you saved my life.” She said.

“But I thought” Scootaloo said, her ears perked back up and she looked up at Rainbow.

“No, You’re alright Scootaloo” Rainbow said, and with that she received the biggest smile from a filly she had ever seen.

‘Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes’ Scootaloo’s mind was repeating over and over.

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Several Months Later...

‘Dear Princess Celestia,
several months before I met Twilight and all of my other awesome friends, I was a pretty terrible friend to other ponies, I learned that you should never dislike another pony just because they may seem annoying, because sometimes they might be the ones who save your life, they might also look up to you and see you as a hero. You can’t just not like a pony because of small things. Your Loyal Subject,
Rainbow Dash’

Rainbow handed Spike the letter and he sent it in a puff of green smoke to Princess Celestia.

Comments

[Secret_Shadows]

So the final part is up, enjoy.

*Spoilers*
Damn were those rhymes hard.....you have no idea how hard it is to come up with rhymes, It took me forever to make a legit sentence that had a word that rhymed with Ponyville....

[OneAmongOthers]

Well finally a Scoot/Dash pairing that doesn't end in tragedy! A little short and rushed but nevertheless at least their both alright! Good show!

[OneAmongOthers]

Also if this is completed you may want to change it to that too!

[Secret_Shadows]

1148442

Oops, I thought I did that, must not have actually saved the change, lol.

[EchoWolf31]

So this takes place before the series started, and Zecora was the one that saved them.

[Secret_Shadows]

*Spoilers*

1150121

Zecora was never a bad pony/zebra, just misunderstood, they knew Zecora before she appeared in the series, they just always thought she was, in the words of pinkie, "An Evil Enchantress"

In all fairness, it can be said that Scootaloo was hallucinating and was saved by somepony or something else. And I never actually said Zecora anyway, I'll leave it up to you guys to decide if it was Zecora or not, maybe it was another pony/zebra? Do they all talk in Rhyme? Who knows! lol.

In the mean time, Rainbow never knew Zecora(?) saved her life because she never woke up, so, its plausible that this would happen and Rainbow would still feel the same way because no one would believe scoots if she said Zecora saved them.

[Conker]

Great story. Nice little thing you did there with the timeline.

[Secret_Shadows]

1151188

Thanks

[WarriorOfHarmony]

It must be Zecora since it said that scootaloo was in a home that was a tree plus the rhyming added to it.

[Secret_Shadows]

1151567

My intention was Zecora, but I am still leaving it up to the reader to decide.

[WarriorOfHarmony]

I think its actualy Zecora v2.1 yum

[Secret_Shadows]

1151674

Whatever floats your boat I guess.....

[Secret_Shadows]

1153806

Uh......thanks? I guess?

[Felix Star]

Great job

[Secret_Shadows]

1210394

Point of the story is to make Rainbow Dash think Scootaloo is annoying but then she learns a bit of a lesson throughout the story and it sets her up for how she is in the show.

[Sgt Dash]

I wonder if this is before Sisterly Bonds... oh wait Scoots doesn't call rainbow her sister. Never mind then

[Secret_Shadows]

1396969

This story is completely unrelated.

[Secret_Shadows]

6373875

Hmm?