Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo have always been similar ponies. Uncover the mysterious past of Scootaloo and the hidden past of Rainbow Dash as they build a new future together,
Rated teen, not for any particular reason, some moments get a little mature at times.
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Much better writing, all though there are quite a few missing commas after someone talks. and Missing " ", I hope you can watch out for those. Anyway MOAR
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There will be more, I will release one chapter a day until it is caught up with where we left off.
There are nine chapters (Or there abouts), each over 10,000 words, and after uploading from google documents I have to reread each chapter to make sure it didn't omit anything, and I simply don't have the time to upload more than one per day right now.
This is like the third re-write seriously stop it
I get into one then you re-write then I have to re-read it already knowing most of the story it's kinda getting annoying
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Its the same story, its not my fault that there was a bit of an argument and it had to be taken down... twice... but, that's been sorted now.
The original rewrite was taken down because of a little accident, and the second time it was taken down because the mods thought it was plagiarism. Its been sorted since then, and it should be fine now.
Right so can I skip the first paragraph then?
i cried during the first half of it.
I enjoyed this very much!
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You can skip up to were you were in the old rewrite yes.
(However google documents is being moody for me and the chapters don't seem to want to upload, so I will be uploading them soon)
So how many chapters where in the old one? Coz I read all the ones that where there
I slightly expected that they would find out who they really are and find out that they are sisters.
MOAR
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There are more chapters, and hopefully my computer won't act up and tomorrow I should be uploading another 1 or even 2 chapters.
yay new chapter
i always wondered about ponies and fish. i like to think there are some who would eat it. the chicken thing freaked me out since scootaloo is a chicken tho
Well you are trying, MOAR
Great story man
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Glad you all like the new chapter.
Well the old chapter that has since been called new...
Also, I'm not the only one to say great story to! Make sure you read the credits at the top of each chapter!
um how long are each chapters going to be?
moar!!!!!!!
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Between 12,000-20,000 words.
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Working on it, the process to upload it from google documents is long and annoying for this story because the chapters are more than 10k words and documents doesn't really like to upload chapters bigger than that.
ok cool
cool story I liked the original too
now I'm just playing with the colors.
cute and sad at the same time.
your going to mess with my feels.
amazing.
moar
and i have no clue how many stories ive read sweetie trying to get a kiss but its still funny lol she will never get one 
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Oh, that was um, shamelessly stolen from another story I read... lol... that's just a recurring background theme I think. I don't think I'll be taking that little subplot anywhere.
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When documents decides to let me upload them, I'll let you know.
MY FEELS HURT! STOP IT! Anyway your grammar/ spelling is getting better and overall writing. The only noticeable thing I have noticed are missing " " in certain areas. ANYWAY MOAR!
glad some one is doing a re write of this the original author is not even working on his
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This is the same re-write from before...
I don't understand how the grammar can get better than it was when it was on enlistedpony's account.
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I... I am the author of the original... you realize this, right?
The reason I stopped is because my dog is being put to sleep and I'm having trouble balancing writing with dealing with real life.
SOOMUCH
2088623 your dog? sorry bout that and its just disappointing when a good story stops but i just lost my adopted mother last thanksgiving so i guess i have a clue
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Well at least you understand, a lot of people would just say "Write anyway, regardless of how you feel"
Also... side, less important note... You did get that i was the original author of Sisterly Bonds, both the rewrite and the original... no I haven't forgotten about that one, its just hard balancing them, I am still working on it, a new chapter is being written, its just going slowly... aside from the fact that I am having, real life problems... I am also helping another author, and writing the rewrite, the original, Scootaloo's not so cool cutie mark, and Cutie Mark Crisis. All of which I would rather them take time to be released and be good, than releasing bad short chapters.
Sorry for this long explanation comment. (Especially since all of this information is available in my on site blog.
) But I felt the need to repeat myself...
Okay sorry, I think I meant from Sisterly Bonds. I read plenty of stories, dozens a day so excuse me for that mistake
. I still want more posted, and you have to understand that posting a story for someone else is a tad confusing if you do not put credit in the synopsis. Anyway sorry, I just wanted to read more on this or Sisterly Bonds the original. 
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Oh also when people like me or others say they want more and are sounding childish, we just mean you are doing a good job and post those as reminders so you know you have an audience instead of posting stories with no viewers
. I hate it when I post a chapter for one of my stories and no one posts even one comment so I try to post at least one reply to each story I read. 2088985
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I'm not posting it for someone else... the only reason it was on Enlistedpony's account in the first place was because it was a re-write and we were afraid it wouldn't get approved on my account. (Because re-writes aren't allowed on the same account.) But, after some time we found it was different enough so its been moved back over.
Then I guess I just meant your writing has improved from the story that this one is meant to be a remake of. Anyway just forget what I mean
and please keep writing/ posting. 2090456
Nice to see you back.
and you have my condolence for the loss of your dog I understand how hard to deal with the loss of a family member. "I consider pets part of the family"
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I consider pets part of the family to... its just hard when they pass...
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Oh, well, okay then, Thank you for the complement
General Note To Everyone:
I had another chapter uploaded, and I was in the process of filling in what the docs-fim transfer omitted when my computer locked up and I had to restart it, loosing ALL of my progress on fim, and that chapter is a 21,000 word chapter, soooo yeah... that will happen soon, but probably not this week because I simply don't have the time to re-read a 21,000 word chapter and fill in at least 10 issues with the upload... just so you all know.
Sun of a.... If you are having issues with the site and properly formatting, I found that copying and pasting from google documents, oddly enough works perfectly ( I think ). But when you copy and paste from word, you run into issues. Also hit the save button like crazy! Just a tip, I can't help ya with you're own computer, sorry. 2118369
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(Replying from sisters account, because she said I had a reply to my message... and I'm to lazy to log her out.)
Documents won't let me highlight 21,000 words. And formatting such as italics and bold doesn't carry over, neither does the {hr} html code when you highlight. And I do save often, was in the middle of saving when it locked up, that's why it didn't save. And I'm not going to upload until the little message goes away saying that "please do not count on the site saving anything important right now."
(I will log back onto my account later and confirm that this was me from my sisters account when she is done on the computer...)
Maybe the site just sucks with more than 15000 words per chapter? As for carrying over, they seem to along with BOLD from google documents for me if you paste as plain text, or maybe I'm lucky or maybe it is the Chrome Browser? Not sure why it would be different, sorry. If I was you, I would split up chapters just to make sure. 2119173
(Yes that was me posting from my sisters account. I bet you all thought it was a lie,
)
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Its just the way docs works, and the chapters are already written, it would be more of a pain to split them up. Just be patient, I will get the chapters up soon.
BUT I WANT THEM NOW!
... Okay I'll be patient. 2119699
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Patience is a virtue.
looking forward to your next update
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Updating today provided documents lets me.
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Since you wanted "MOAR NOW" I thought I'd let you know the new chapter was up!
Lol...