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Rainbow Dash finally takes notice of Scootaloo and brings her up under her own wing. With Rainbow Dash's new support, Scootaloo learns to be more than she had ever dreamed. But will the relationship she has just gained turn out to be more than they can handle? She quickly learns that not everyone's true self can be perceived.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 105 )

Oh yes, the potential is strong in this one!

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Thanks, I will attempt to make it worth while.

1764730 I hope so.
It was definitely worth to read. Here is a fave and like from me.

Wow, that was great! :rainbowkiss:

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glad you liked it, starting up chapter 2 now :rainbowkiss:

just watched the episode, and knew there was going to be a great fanfic instantly!:rainbowlaugh:
I expect great things from you!:moustache:

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I had to get on my computer fast to claim it as mine; pressure is on :twilightoops:

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Yeah I bet! are you working on the next right now?:pinkiehappy:

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Yep, just got on to start chapter two. :twilightsmile:

The worst part is I have the perfect ending planned out... but I have to write all the points to lead up to it. :ajsleepy:

1764722 the force is strong in this one

Must resist the urge hnnng gahh urhg can't resist much longer

D'AAAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!!

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I have chapter 3 ready to post, the site is just having issues. Sorry about that :scootangel:

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Alright Chapter three is ready for your enjoyment.

I wish chapter four was readily for my enjoyment :fluttercry:

Finish chapter 4 already man! I'm waiting for it!

the feels are starting to ache-Duece

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I'm on it, maybe an hour left. :rainbowdetermined2:

MoAr!!! this Is aweshumn!! it's getting great!:pinkiehappy:
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Comment posted by MattTheGreat deleted Dec 11th, 2012

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Glad you're enjoying the story! Makes me wish I had all day to push out multiple chapters :fluttercry:

I really like where this is going. Your really understand the different characters and how they interact. Can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you, planning the next chapter now. :rainbowdetermined2:

I gotta hand it to you man, you write like a boss :ajsmug:

I'm glad your the first one at this idea, nopony else could flush this out as wonderfully!

Keep up the good work!:rainbowdetermined2:

YES!! Chapter four!!! :rainbowkiss:
One word that describes this?
Super-fantastic-ultra-spectaculararly-Awesome!!

MUST READ CHAPTER FIVE!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

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Short Hiatus until Thursday. Sorry 'bout that. :derpyderp2:

Alright the short break is over and I am writing Chapter 5 right now! :twilightoops:

Oh the happy feels... :twilightsmile:
I wish they could stay forever!:raritydespair:

I really like this story thus far. The only thing I would change is it feels a little short and abrupt. Showing Scootaloo around Dash's cloud house for example I felt could be fleshed out more. See how Scootaloo reacts to various objects Dash might have, and those objects in turn building Dash's character beyond that of the show.

In either case, your characters are very believable and I am thoroughly enjoying it. :twilightsmile::scootangel:

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Oh I see, I'll be sure to build off of that :twilightsmile:

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What is exactly? :trixieshiftright:

:rainbowderp: I uh I can't seem to remember

I uh have no idea what this is either :rainbowhuh:
Jeez WTF happened?

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Hmmmm... late night post? :ajsleepy:
EDIT: Oh newgrounds... that explains it

Oh yeah
Saw that stupid pony dating dib or whatever the fuck it's called on new grounds :facehoof:

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Pony dating? Sounds.... interesting. :rainbowlaugh:

Don't play it
It's a stupid, pointless game that was probably made by a troll

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Oh I've seen this, yeah probably a troll. :facehoof:

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Thanks :pinkiehappy: I just started a new chapter and hope it will be complete soon!

Yay! Scoots flying always brings the feels :twilightsmile::scootangel:

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