My name's Desten, my favorite pony is Applejack and I've wanted to write ever since I read My Little Dashie I knew I had to do fanfiction. I hope you all like my stuff!
Rainbow Dash is finally invited to become a Wonderbolt. She astounds everypony with her amazing winning streak, yup life is good for Rainbow, everything she ever wanted is in her hoof. What could go wrong right? But sometimes expectations can be abolutly shattered just when it seems the happy ending is in sight.
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wil you sequel this story?
1391136 I may just to finish it off, or I may unmark the 'compleat' status and add more chapters. *shrugs* Idk, I have one other fanfic I have to write as a request. Supersad called Down, Vicotry road. After that if you want I'll prbably add an epilouge to prep for a second wind
Well, that was anticlimactic.
yes must have sequal please
1392523>>1392733 Alright all right I'll set it up for a sequal just give me a day or so...
1394995 In the mean time if you want check out my other work, most of it was a lot better than this one.
This was a nice story but uberly fast-paced!!! I just cant stress that enough! But i LIKED it
it was very nice, fairly true , only, like i said, tooooooooooo fast!!!
I would enjoy a sequal and may i, i can be your part-time prereder for it, i can help you push it to the limit cuz it truly has potential!!!!
t-that is... If you wouldnt mind 
Very well done I enjoyed the read and I look forward to more of your wrightings
Great outline now flesh it out please more details on scoots and rainbow and the 10 years you passed up would be great.
I have to be honest that after only a week I doubt Scootaloo would be exited at getting to train with dash she would most likely still be in grief that would last countless months if not years my friend lost his mother four years ago and he still suffers from bouts of depresion
When's the sequel coming out?
2427785 Uh... haven't really thought about it in a while I'm working on two really big projects right now plus running my FB page is a hastle in itself. I've got a lot of ideas I want to get out and not enough of me to do the work. Where's the mirror pond when you need it right?
But ya I'll get to the sequel whenever I finish these other two project pinkie promise.
Also I'm probably gunna have to revise the old details of the story to make it more interesting. Spoiler just so you don't have to reread the whole friggen thing Scoots mom never existed in the story she was just homeless from the start, Dash left Scoots was sad and Dashie came back BAM takes her in and happy ever after for that until the sequel.
Oh, what projects are you working on atm? Good luck on them.
2430553 working on Lulay Moon Princess, which is the ENTIRE story of what happened with Luna Celestia and Nightmare moon. It's based off the song Lullaby for a princess by I think her name is ponyphoric, and it features the backstory of Discord as well as King Sombra, who was (at the time) not as evil as we thought he was. And Rainbow, my second ever human crossover which is also based off music, this one by Koroshi-ya ironically enough titled 'Rainbow' the same as the story.
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Actually it was a he, Ponyphonic, His first song, The Moon Rises tells the story of Luna turning into Nightmare Moon.
Faux Synder, has lyrics based on Lullaby for a Princess that goes into Nightmare Moon's feelings and thoughts while imprisoned on the moon Luna's Soliloquy, and then Lullaby for a Princess has a friend of Ponyphonic doing the female vocals for his song, showing Princess Celestia's regret and pain for doing what she did.
Honestly I used to listen to those three in that order for months. It is a beautiful story all together. I wish you the best of luck. I kind of did my own version of the Nightmare Moon, Discord, Sombra history in my story. But I can't wait to see your own version I quite look forward to it.
I thought that the new owner in the feeds page said that Humans in Equestria stories were no longer allowed, but HiE stories that existed before that rule were being godfathered in? Was that just an april fools joke or something? Regardless, they both sound like good stories.
2440891 I knew about the other songs I didn't know ponyphionic was a guy though... the story's based loosely on a collage of all sorts of songs but the main ones I stick to are Lullaby for a Princess and Luna's Reply.
As for the HiE story it's technically not a human IN EQ per say it's more just the tragic tale of a bedside brony and his desire to see Dash before he dies. Listen to Koroshi-ya's rainbow you'll catch the drift of what I'm thinking about when I hear it.
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Listened to the song. Wasn't really my cupa tea, but story wise I can see how it'd be inspirational. Best of luck to you.
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Talking about the Rainbow song.
I liked this story heaps but it sucked how little detail was shed on the 10 years that passed, hopefully the sequel makes up for it
Aww yea! Sorindash! :)