My name's Desten, my favorite pony is Applejack and I've wanted to write ever since I read My Little Dashie I knew I had to do fanfiction. I hope you all like my stuff!
A lot of people see Diamond Tiara as a stuck up rich little filly, yet nopony has stopped to ask the question "WHY?" I'm here to tell you all that even underneath the cover of a pony like DT there's a side of the story you wouldn't expect. And maybe even you'll find yourself watching her more closely in the episodes.
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I read the first two chapters. There's a lot of grammar errors and some minor spelling errors littered in it. You should get someone to preread and maybe edit it for you. Other than that, this could become a good one. The idea of the fic itself is nice, I'd like to see a little more background on DT and this fic is good for just that.
Get a prereader and you'll be fine.
You spelt "Filly" with a "P"... I know it might sound like that when you say it out loud, but I assure you it's not spelt like that on paper...
Like 625443 said, get yourself a pre-reader ASAP and you should be fine.
This story is good other than spelling and grammar errors here and there.
Have two Fluttershys and a twist
625443thanks its my very first mlp fanfic and sorry about the gramar errors although Chisel does have an accent so i wanted to portray that. I don't acctually know any other bronys so i don't have a designated prereader yet.
626322
There's groups here that offer help with prereading, you should look for one of those groups and hook up with one of 'em. The fic is a solid idea, it just needs refining.
very good story a bit of a tear jerker bravo good sir
thanks syphony ill look into that and thanks to you too bronyhood of steel it was kinda the whole theme to get ppl bronymotional
629834
Here to help.
Aw so sad to know that Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon aren't real friends, they seem to get along so well, or at least they used to (cough, cough "Family Apprection Day" and "Ponyvillie Confidential")
I think that "Mare" is a model of his lost love.
He wants her to make a 'Diamond Tiara'.
And I think this is how she gets her cutie mark.
Ah young love.
So Chisel knew Big Macintosh, nice to see that even as a little colt Big Mac could hold his own.
I don't think Chisel ever saw Fluier again though.
Man now I can see why Filthy Rich tried to take steps in 'Family Apprection Day' to correct Daimond Tiara's behavior, he's worried she'll grow up to be like HIM.
Uh oh.
Such a sad ending, but there's hope.
Nice to see that Diamond Tiara made her peace with Applebloom.
632641 lol im glad you enjoyed the story it's my very first fanfic ill be doing more of the Equestrian Rich Pony series, next one up is Lyra
I made the mistake of listening to "You're the inspiration" by Chicago while reading this last chapter.
This is a masterpiece. Can't wait to read the rest of your series.
700206lol well its not really a series its more like different stories of the lives of rich background characters around equestria. I'm brainstrorming ideas for Lyra next.
When I heard "loud racket" and "shed" guess what I was thinking
I shed a manly tear
915253lol you waiting for swag.mov too glad you liked the story i have many a more that are apparently better than this one try out the untold story of ditzy doo for some reason i cant seem to get anybrony to give it a thumbs down
920625sure thing
This is going to be sad I can just tell.
I do love a bittersweet ending.
1965635 This was my first idea for a fanfic I'm really glad a lot of people liked it and also that it isn't compleatly dead after so long ago of me writing it.
Definitely needs a proofreading pass. And so while the premise seems promising, going to hold off on reading it for now.
This is a pretty good story, but you need to get somepony to proofread it. If you'd like, I could do it.
2162221 That'd be really nice I'd like that.
If this is the DT edition, doe that mean there will be a Silver Spoon edition?
looking forward to reading this BTW
Jack Sparrow: lies slander and calumny!
that said I shall continue
Your father is an asshole!
Your Class mates wish you were dead!
Your best freind is a phony. (coughsBULLSHIT)
Your mother is the only pony that is glad you were ever born!
But DON'T worry and put a SMILE on that FACE, DT!
Because
Chisel is da Pony Fonz
well you didn't describe Deliae accurately at all if in fact she is the same pony we see with the Fleur De Lis Cutiemark that is Fancy Pants escort.
She is a white unicorn with a pink mane and tail and lavender eyes.
3577060Deleai is an OC character and I even put in there that she looks just like Fluier only younger. As for the pony seen with Fancy, her name was Fluer de Lis same concept except no relation. Fluier and her daughter have nothing to do with her.
3598710
okay. still a little confusing but allright.
will there be a Secret Diary of An Equestrian Rich Pony:Silver Spoon Edition? I would hope to find out DT's assumption that she means nothing to Silver would be a falsehood.
3599032Not sure I've got a lot of fiction to write. But that sounds like a really good idea, I'll take it under consideration and contact you when I get to it.
3599479
the consideration alone is appreciated.
I just hate when ponies say Silver follows either out of fear or some other ulterior motive, when all I see is two fillies very devoted to each other, willing to forsake all others to support one another. Either as friends or lovers depending on your taste.
3599910 I'll figure it out when I get to it. Thanks for reading!
3602264
my pleasure