My name's Desten, my favorite pony is Applejack and I've wanted to write ever since I read My Little Dashie I knew I had to do fanfiction. I hope you all like my stuff!
Before she was Derpy Hooves, before she liked muffins or bubbles, Ditzy Doo was teased and bullied at school. Until the day she meets a pony that changes her whole life, Domino Dots is his name, and he's here to be Ditzy's very best friend.
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I like is fic
No comments? Anyway i like where this is going
Pretty good fic. Here have a Derpy for the good job.
639785 i will tolerate this, but nopony loves it when you spam crap like this
640552 thank you i would remove it but i am a believer in free speech so i will leave him alone, whatever the hay it is...
Im glad that you all like it. Ill be doing more like this in the future thanks everybrony!!!
641137 I think it's an ad, but I don't trust random links, so I won't check where it leads me
only one comment? great story so far. poor ditzy...
So happy for Ditzy/Derpy. really cute story!
waitwaitwait
I THOUGHT DERPY SAID THAT DOMINOE WAS HER BEST FRIEND
THEN ALL OF A SUDDEN SHE'S IN LOVE WITH HIM
AND HE HAD A CRUSH ON RAINBOW
WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN
good story. gives plenty of insight to derpy and makes a good background to her character.
this was awesome!!!!!!
so happy for derpy
642004 its just a character building black eyes read the whole thing and itll make sense in the end. Besides, stories that go from loyal best friends to romantic relationship is always the best kind, it makes the fangirls go DAAAAAAWWWWW lol
Short but sweet. Thanks for the brilliant read!
It was a nice story, but you REALLY should get a spellchecker and/or a proofreader. There's so many spelling and punctuation errors to be seen, it feeds the dormant Grammar Nazi in me.
Still, have a thumbs up.
652120thanks and ya ive been told about my horrible grammar i'm in the process of trying to find an editor
Nice story. Good insight on the character. The idea itself was not original (Derpy ships are a dime a dozen) but Domino's story was new and interesting. A few grammar and spelling errors ("Guuard" chapter four or five). A great story.
I liked this a lot,
667170ya i get alot on my spelling, i know derpy fic probably exploded after the whole issue with her but i don't think many of them got popular, at least i haven't seen any that have been. but thanks for your oppinion, i need every one i can get. I'll probably be devastated when i get a dislike for this lol. its been up for a week now nobrony has disliked it. and ya i know about the spelling errors, im trying to get an editor, im new to this site, only a week and a half old so ya. anyways thanks.
I could take a look and edit it if you'd like.
>>inuboy7
I will gladly offer my services as editor if you need one, because if you get me I'll send it to my friend who is more of a grammar nazi than I. So basically you will get a two in one deal.
Plus, this story is amazing, I loved the slow pace thing went at and what not, don't see many that go at this sort of pace and plot. Good job. I rate this five out of five yay's
770981thanks just pm me sometime I'll send you the link to edit it
That P.S. at the end has given me ideas, I will take the challenge of writing a sequel, it might not be as good as this one, but I will try my best.
641137
It's not free speech, it's spam. A bot made that.
Also, authors notes has 666 words, lol.
942417lol i laughed when i saw that as well
So cute!
965800 that's what i was going for
i had to do something after seeing the save derpy campain so late
ive alwaysed loved ditys
such a sad story,but now there only the gap in between what happened to domino and how dinky came to be and how ditzy got her crossed eyes and he speech disability. i think her speech disability was aphasia
1056905 I'm probably not gunna do a second story for this to be honest. I think I'll leave it at that, as for the speech I didn't find it necessary to include seeing as it wasn't consistant with anything. I'm getting help with editing now so the words may change... a bit. But the initial basis of the story's gunna be the same.
third comment, i thought bronies had hearts, like this so far.
dwaaaaa
choke, arrrrgggg, my heart.
BUCK THE POLICE!!
1348833 Lulz I'm glad you liked the story. This is one of my own personal faves of mine.
I almost didn't read it because of the coverart but im glad I did it gave me this feeling kinda like sad
but happy at the same time is there a word for it? sad and happy.
.............. *gasp* SAPPY
!!!
This Is COMPLETELY off topic but have you wondered why is there a pinkiesad2 but there isn't a pinkiesad1
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is all we have to say