Long ago Equestria relied on a small sacrifice of happiness from each pony. It was a tradition held through the ages, it protected Equestria from evil like Discord. When the tradition stopped the Spell holding the Spirit of chaos was released. To prevent such a travesty again the Pegasai held a meeting in Cloudsdale to discuss what to do. The answer was simple, tradition fades, so the only way to sacrifice the happiness to the skies was to take it forcefully. It's apparently been some other fanfic that Glaze wroe a song about, I didn't know that when I started writing. Anyways here's my version. Not so psychotic Rainbow Dash.
Chapters (7)
This... It burns...
See here for the original music.
674167I've seen the music video I based it on that, I didn't want to do the exact same thing though. Especially because I found out that that song was based on another fanfic. I wanted to do myown take on it.
Angel is male...
I haven't read this fic, and I don't plan on doing so either. But I HIGHLY suggest that you should change the name from the same as an already known fic.
Your own version or not. This is not an order or demand, just a proposal as others might start to whine or confuse this fic with the original one.
An example:
It's called Rainbow Fac- WAIT WHAT!? Then what the buck is on my read later list!? o_O 
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This won't do, time to rant!''
This is what I thought when I saw the title;
''Oh, a new fic.
*checks the bottom of the list*
''No, no, NO!
Just sayin'
674498oops...
Fluttershy!
674528 I'll keep that in mind thanx
I cried at the end
{like my profile pic? :)}
Is it bad that I laughed when Angel got killed?
NOooooooooooooooooo!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Not Twilight! NO!
T_T
NO! RARITY! T_T
PINKIE! You monster!
APPLEJACK! T_T
Sad fic is sad.
Poor Rainbow... I guess...
837019lol no its not bad i wanted to kill the little bastard dont blame me im not really a fan of angel glad you like the fic though seems like most bronies are on the fence seeing as this is a retake of Rainbow Factory I just wanted to put a different spin on it... i killed aj last just cuz I lovve her the most thats why hers is the most brutal (why do we hurt the ones we love)isis sorry aj
i take it im not forgiven
Just wanted to say, haven't read the fic, I might in the future. But that FUCKIN' PICTURE. I've seen all 7 saw films, The shinning, The poltergeist, The Exorcist, Scream. And that picture scared me as much as any of them... my god, who is the artist?
906755uh... i dont know lol i found it on google you can probably find it on deviantart though
909049 My god man. I will try and find it, read the fic by the way. It was good not steller, but good none the less
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Ah, I've always been a sucker for organs and eyes being poked and prodded. And doesn't Rainbow know Angel bunny was Fluttershy's favourite pet?
Ah great, Fluttershy, the SHY one! Dashie's gone really insane now.
I don't think Scootaloo would appreciate her friends being killed... I love these stories!
So I guess celestia and luna are cruel ponies? -.- Ok nevermind, I just remembered dash just killed 5 of her friends. But still, beating up a kid. Just mean.
1032669 ya know those are probably the problems people had with it when it was first released. I had 5 thumbs down and only one TU, eventually more people saw it and the tides turned like it says in the title i did my own take on Rainbow Factory. I wanted Dash to be at first super psyco but as you read it shows her concience kicks in, but it's already too late. i admit not my best fanfic but what do you expect from three days of work. My other stuff is better, although don't expect tos see much dark work, if your looking for that the deepest I go into Dark is my Whyspers Trilogy starting with Paradox in Equestria.
Yeah, I have to stop here.
This story just feels way too rushed for what it's trying to do.
Soviet Malashenka (Dash) Was sitting at her oak wood desk, watching the screen as the scene unfolded in front of her, she was crying while watching her doppelganger murder Fluttershy, much like she had done, although that was an execution, not murder. But these were not tears of sadness. No, these were tears of pride. "I'm so proud of you comrade. As just like me you do not hesitate to murder the capitalist filth. But you could do much for me. As could I for you.
You deserve this RD, you killed your friends and took pride in it.
Now you will never know friendship again