Fret Notehooves was a musician that married a beautiful mare named Azure. Their romance was a wildfire that now cinders as Fret awaits to join his beloved wife. One time shot at a one pager, this is what I thought of. Fret Notehooves is an OC of a friend please don't mind my spelling and grammer I know I'm horrible with that.
Complete with just 1442 words?
OC centered? Hmmmm...
I will give it a go and return here after reading.
1968940 Just a one shotter in the dark, nothing special.
Read it and...
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A little grammar error here and there. You still could flesh it better, maybe try to aim to a 3k words long healthier chapter lenght.
But in general, good go, you won my green thumb.
The only problem that I need to point is the spacing. Always press the enter button when finishing a sentence, or your story ends up looking like a wall of text.
1969027 I know I've got a lot of terrible grammer and spelling mistakes, I'm trying to fix it. As for the lenght... eh maybe I'll go back and add a few more words to it just to strech it out. But it was just a first try at a one pager, I'm not experianced with writing 3k word chapters.
Well done, sir. You seem to have made a great piece of fanfiction. My only advice for you would be to increase the length of your story
1971472 I'll work on it later... probably tonight after I get back from work.