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Hi I'm Scootaloo, the coolest, most awesome, bestest pony in all of Equestria, behind my big sister Rainbow Dash of course, and I finally got my Cutie Mark! But...its not a mark in something I'd ever want anypony to know about me. Oh I know! I could paint over it! No that wouldn't work, the paint would wash out, I could always not wash, but then Aero might not like me anymore! Ugh this is too hard! I'll sort it out later!

((This story is set in the Rewrite: Sisterly Bonds universe, but set more funny than drama.))

Cover Art is a picture by DeviantArt user DeMoXyRaPhYm-MSlyce

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 28 )

Cool story, I think I'll keep with it to see where it goes.:scootangel:

So is the Cutie-Mark she is getting in your Canon? Is it a 'what if' story?

and so marks the newest gabby gums

EDIT: oh wait that wasn't a camera flash nvm

I would be interested to see what her cutie mark looks like. The G3 canon one - a purple and orange butterfly - might work for someone whose special talent is dance. However, I wonder if many ponies might misinterpret it as a clan mark (like the Apples' cutie marks) and assume that it means Scootaloo is Fluttershy's love-child. :scootangel::fluttershbad::rainbowlaugh:

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My head canon changes all of the time, but yes, in my version of the my little pony world.....this is what happens, lol.

Not really a 'what if'..... its a slight variation on the real mlp universe, perhaps I should put an alternate universe tag on these.......though, I didn't think it was necessary to do so as the only difference is a new character and Scoots and Dash being sisters...

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Read the title of the story again, lol.

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This is only the prologue, you ain't seen nothing yet. You will get to see her cutie mark soon....very soon.

I was thinking about instead of using art I found via a google search of "Scootaloo" I thought maybe I'd get an artist to do actual cover art for the story... said cover art would contain what her cutie mark looks like.

i thought the flash would be a camera flash, Scoots gasping since her picture was taken and her falling due to the flash of the camera blinding her.

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You'll have to wait till the next chapter to find out, but I think its fairly obvious what it was.

Interesting and cute MOAR :flutterrage: Fluttershy DEMANDS IT

Good, you don't want to make :fluttershysad: angry...1879154

Cool is what you make it, not what other people think. Why can't being the greatest dancer of her generation be awesome too? I'm sure Sweetie Belle will be glad to tell her that being beautiful and graceful can be awesome! :raritywink:

It’s ok if you don’t want to be my colt friend anymore

once
i knew a guy
who said that
when he thought his gf
was about to break up with him
and it turns out she wasn't going to
until he said that, lol

hey just becausze you can dance ballet doesnt make you less cool it just means that you are more graceful then most

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Thats the moral of the story, before I got to it, DAMN YOU ALL! I DIDN'T GET TO PUT IN A LETTER TO CELESTIA!!!!!!!!!! And that was going to be the epilogue... I always, ALWAYS do letters to celestia when I have some form of lesson... and ya'll have done gone and ruined it! lol... Nah, its no big deal, its kinda obvious that's the lesson.

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Aero isn't going to break up with Scootaloo, not after all they have been through together, even after Scootaloo said that. (I wish I could reference you to the chapter of the rewrite... currently its only on google docs at the moment because of a small little thing...) But point being, if I do ever write a story about Aero breaking up with Scoots... I will have to make Knighty add a drama tag, lets just say that.

God to see more writing from you.:rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy:

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Thank you, its just the holidays were such a pain and I had so much going on, I am back now though and hopefully I can start getting chapters out, I have like what? Three or Four unfinished stories up right now? Not to mention the stories that aren't published yet that you guys can't see... Yeah I'll be updating them all within the month.

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I'm pretty sure most girl friends don't like to be called colt friends.

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Ahaha, I missed that when I read that comment, great catch. :rainbowlaugh:

That put the voice of a mad evil genius in my head :pinkiecrazy:

Soon, soon I shall take over this pathetic world and rule with an Iron Hoof MWUHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Yay this updated! And it has feels! MOAR! :flutterrage:

Someone gonna have to slap a filly? :twilightangry2:

Discord - even as a 'friend', he's very rarely anything but trouble. Of course, the God of Chaos probably knows exactly what's going on and where the two missing youths are. He wouldn't just come out and tell Fluttershy, of course; where's the fun in that? :flutterrage:

I also suspect that Discord may have led Fluttershy to the right place for the sake of his own amusement.

Now, I wonder how Rainbow and Fluttershy will react to the two of them snuggled up together? Grounded for life or longer?

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They've been in that situation already... and yes, that sounds about right.

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I would not condone such behavior.

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In time.

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Should I be concerned? lol...

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