A month after the events of "A Sweetie Lesson In Friendship" The Cutie Mark Crusaders are back together, but one thing still stands strong in Sweetie's mind, a colt actually, a colt called Shadow Fire. When the events that nearly ruined Sweetie's life happened, he discovered she had a crush on him, only to be told later that it was all a lie to get back at Sweetie, he is still awkward around Sweetie. Find out what happens when Sweetie tries to kindle a relationship with Shadow Fire.
The tag Romance is on there simply because there will be minor romantic moments between the pair, but its not full on romance, its light romance, so don't be expecting gooey frilly stuff.
Chapters (5)
older filly younger colt bound to go well
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Did not think about that when writing this....
Its meant to be a cute little story, not a big romance story, just for the record.
1042193 Oh okay by the way for the recored how old are the foals in this fic because in some they are 9 or 8 and in others they are 7 or 6
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Hmmm, I am not sure, but if I had to say an age...Based on what I have written in Part II that you cant see yet....(Not trying to be a smart ass, seriously thinking about it)
I would have to say....
The cutie mark crusaders would probably be around 10-12ish, somewhere in there.
And Shadow Fire would be around the same age.
I'm going off of the cutie mark logic here, if a cutie mark is basically (For lack of a better term) Puberty, that usually happens around 10-12ish.....so thats my basis for aging them.
actualy my friend what you are thinking of is adolecence which is form the time you are born till you are 18 (female) 21(male) puberty usualy hits between 13-15
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Yeah that, so probably around 12-14 ish then....Its really hard to put an age on ponies, curse you hasbro for not releasing their official ages! lol.
1042887 in the show i would say around 7
1042896 I'd say a bit older than that in the show, probably around 10-12, but that's just my opinion, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
My logic for them being older is, a young pony aged 7 would probably not keep a diary. And if they had been 7 in this fiction, or even 10, they would probably still think the other gender had "Cooties" or the pony equivalent.
1042913 most but not all i remember even when i was that age i started to like girls
1042913 most but not all i remember even when i was that age i started to like girls
Pretty good story my friend,I like it
. I didn't read your first one though so I'll have to refer back to it,but it was a good read none the less. I made a book about the Crusaders myself and if you need any help I wouldn't mind giving my two cents
. Although I'd like to see a new chapter if you're willing to make it that is
If this story receives positive feedback I might write another Sequel, I don't know, I just don't want to be redundant and repetitive.
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I think I know enough about the Crusaders for this story, however If you see something that seems a bit out of character, by all means, please give me your 2 cents, I need all the suggestions I can get so it can be the best it can be.
Also, This story will not end with just that first chapter, its going to have a few chapters.
And if you have not read the first one, I recommend you do, you will be able to follow this story without reading the first one, but you wont understand some of the references I make in the story if you don't read the first story. (But I am trying to make it readable for people who have not read the first story, so let me know if it gets to confusing for those of you who have not read the first story.)
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I think I will leave it open to the reader to decide what age they are, however Shadow Fire is younger than Sweetie by a year (At least I think that's what I wrote, if you can't see that part yet then, oops late spoiler, lol.)
yeah its year guess that makes sweetie s cougar
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Chapter II will be up soon, eventually, before Thursday, at least, I hope.....That or Chapter I will be edited by that time, lol.
Side note: The hub has listened, they have moved mlp to prime time, this is very, excellent...
I would be finishing part II and writing part III, but watching the show is more important at the moment, lol.
:D I love this story SO much!
You're fantastic! 
:D I need to read more of this....I NEED to XD
ooooook then. I guess I'll start writing part 3 then.
And thanks, I try :)
god pinkie die just die
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NEVAH!
Anyway, part 3 is up guys, sorry its taking so long, even though its only been what, a day? Anyway my editor is getting to it as fast as he can, so hold yourselves together, this story is just really good.
I personally like the end, and I think you all will to, spoilers!
threequel?
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You sir have read my mind, however, If I do a threequel, It shall not be for a while, I have several other stories that shall appear before I make a threequel to this.
Edit*: This story has been finished for every one else reading the comments.....
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I have but one criticism....... this was too F
KING short!!!!!
Something I don't understand
If Sweetie and Fire grew up still dating and meanwhile Rarity and Bolt got married what would go on with Sweetie and Fire since they'd be Brother and Sister in Law but they're dating? I'm asking this because I've actually been wondering this for awhile when you see something like this happening, I wonder what would happen and wouldn't it be a bit strange for them.
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Wasn't thinking that far ahead when I wrote it. Lol.
this must be what they looked like media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/1f/d8/8a/1fd88ae7fcd438204373900bd4662675.jpg SOOOO CUTE!