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Rainbow Dash has always been fond of Scootaloo, cheering her on from the sidelines and admiring her with almost religious reverence. But when her parents are absent from the talent show Rainbow Dash learns that this is in fact a common occurrence and begins to suspect that there's more to the filly than she originally thought. She takes it upon herself to find out the truth and help her number one-fan.
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Very cute, though you could use a proofreader since there are a couple grammar mistakes(like the fact that you keep using 'your' when it should be 'you're').
You have melted my heart!
Well done, my friend.Well done.
"Oh you know, your scared of dragons and Zadora had extra projection dust."
who is zadora zecora's sister?
*applauds*
Great story!
Such a great a story. Needs a sequel!
Well, it's not very original, I've seen it blah blah blah...
Nope, give no fucks 'cause Scootalove!
WHY EVERY STORY OF SCOOT IS THAT OF HER BEING A ORPHAN.
1131629 Because nopony or person has seen her parents so they/we assume she is an orphan.
Ooof, good story and all but I think I am going have to stop reading for now, just going have to remember I stopped right at where Rainbow gathered the other five on the train to tell them what she had learned.
Might I suggest that next time you put up a story like this you cut it up into chapters, its hard to read this much at once.
1131102
Very true to the heart. 
1130880
Zadora is an actress who was famous for being bad at it, both as a youth and adult. Snopes has an article about her Anne Frank performance being so bad that audience members tried to alert the army-actors on stage to her location. At least according to Google.
But I think the author meant Fedora. Those exist in Equestria, right?
1130880
Typo. I fixed it.
By the gods tears of joy do exist but how the hell do I turn them off?!?
Will there be a sequel for flare?
1130576 yeah me too, if i havn't read this kind of premise before, seriously always the same, (scoot either orphan or abuse than rd adopts her.) your sad for falling over something that been done a million times (Something thats NOT even cannon, just fanon.)
BUT: ""Well flare, your gonna have the coolest rainbow maned pegasus for a grandmother. She helped mummy for many years and I just know she'll do the same for you."
Scootaloo kissed her fouls forehead then turned back to her beaming sister. Her sister.
... don't you mean "Her mother" or "for a aunt"?
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Oh yeah that's a good point actually, will have to correct that.
I can imagine that Rainbow Dash would be the sort of mother that colts are terrified of. "She's a Luna-darned Superhero! She takes down Changelings and Griffins for breakfast! She'll kill me if I come anywhere near you, Scootaloo!"
"No she won't! She's a softie really!"
"Mwah?"
I think if I were to vote for another story, it would be how Scoot got her Cutie Mark and the first post-Cutie Mark adventure for the Crusaders.
"So! I see you three have finally stopped being Blankflanks!"
"What do you want Diamond Tiara?"
"Er... well... I was hoping that you three ruffians could help me out with something...?"
I loved this story, it was beautiful, now you just need to change all the 'foul' to 'foal' because foul sounds like a bird...
So...fucking...cute
So, aside from a number of typos in the first part - mostly a lack of apostrophes on possessives - I found this very heart warming. Mind you, it was quite brief, and quickly paced, but 'twas an enjoyable read nonetheless. Thank you for the lovely one-shot + epilogue.
It's complicated.
Dash's relations to Scoots
Dash and Scoots accept each other has sisters. sister
Dash adopts Scoots. sister and mother
Scoots give birth to Flare. Dash is Flare's aunt/grand mother.
To clarify Dash's relation to Flare; we need to answer one question. Is Dash in relation to Scoots; a sister or a mother?
You need a proof-reader man, there are CRAPTONS of mistakes. Of course, being a Scootalove fan myself, they meant little to me. However, it did deter me from reading so many times. I suggest going through your story once more, and fixing mistakes like this one:
very good but i think it would be easier to read if you cut it up into different chapters with major scene changes instead of one long chapter.
other than that
1132002 i guess (Still gets somewhat repetitive after awhile
D'awwwwwww
scootalove forever! /)
A thousand million billion likes!!!
I dunno if this has been said yet, but this should be cannon. That was one of the most amazing and beautiful stories I have ever read. Thank you.
Awwww. This...was....so.....AWESOME!! (And adorable:)
AMAZING, but... featherweight? wth. great ending, but am I missing something, whats the big deal with a red pegasi named flare. espially coronal flare
Ohmisweetcelestia that was adorable!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
Though, there were some punctuation and spelling errors I wanted to fix so badly.
Maybe its just because I'm the captain of the Spelling Police.
Beautiful, with or without typos. <3
Dawwwwwww. So CUTE I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!
FAN-F%#$@^&-TASTIC!!! THIS WAS AWESOME!!!
Puppy.
Overwhelming... adorableness... must... resist... oh who am I kidding, AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Great fanfic.
A couple of spelling/grammar mistakes, other than that... FLUFF!
Despite needing to be looked over closely for some spelling errors sprinkled throughout, this was an extremely sweet story
Or maybe try drag racing."
Count me in! My favorite sport!!!
1131102
Exactly my thoughts when I read a Fanfic where Scoots gets adopted by Rainbow Dash. I don't care how many there are or how unoriginal it is, because you can never get enough Scootalove
I Loved the this story when i only read the first chapter. And i still love the story, but i really feel that this chapter ruins a lot of it.
I mostly just think that if you have a story about shipping (Scootaloo and Featherweight) You shouldn't make such huge time skips. If you make a shipping story or at least a chapter that has a lot of focus on it like this. It really just ruins the story for me when i see that its just little moments we get to see. Everything else is mostly just time skips.
I understand that you can't just write a 50k word story or something like that.
But in my opinion it would be better if you then just didn't make shipping if you didn't go in depth about it.
But anyways. While i really don't like this second chapter. I mostly still just see the first one as a one shot. And as a oneshot, it is one of my favorite Scootadopt fictions i've read
I feel like certain parts of this chapter were a bit unneeded mainly everything after the graveyard scene seemed a bit unneeded.
Aww! Loved the story. I'm all for a happy and safe Scoots.
I think that you've got Rainbow Dash confused with Scootaloo in the beginning part of this description. Here's what I mean:
Scootaloo has always been fond of Rainbow Dash, cheering her on from the sidelines and admiring her with almost religious reverence. But when Scootaloo's parents are absent from the talent show Rainbow Dash learns that this is in fact a common occurrence and begins to suspect that there's more to the filly than she originally thought. She takes it upon herself to find out the truth and help her number one-fan.
Either that, or take out the following:
This describes Scootaloo feelings towards Rainbow Dash, but it does not work in reverse. At least, we have yet to see anything in canon supporting that it works in reverse.
d’awwwww!!!! SOOOOO CUUUUUTTTTEEEE!!!
beautiful just beautiful