• Published 28th Sep 2017
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Nightmare Remnant - Starlight Glimmer1



What if Princess Celestia was unable to end Starlight Glimmer's nightmare?

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Epilogue: Letter to the princess

After Twilight and Starlight had told everyone that they’re dating Pinkie Pie started talking about what kind of party she was going to throw for them, but Twilight and Starlight made it clear that they didn’t want to make a huge deal about it. Although the two made it clear that they didn’t want to make a big deal out it, that didn’t stop Pinkie from setting off her party cannon and throwing them a small party (as small as it gets with Pinkie anyway) right then and there. Knowing there was nothing they could do about it, Twilight and Starlight decided to just enjoy the party.

By the time everypony left the sun had begun to set and Twilight and Starlight were left by themselves while Spike did whatever it is he does when he’s alone. Since they just started their relationship they decided to plan out their first date.


Twilight walked into her bedroom, ready to call it a night. She and Starlight had just finished planning their first date and night had fallen.

Before going to bed, Twilight pulled out a quill and parchment and began writing a letter.

Dear Princess Celestia

I am happy to say that I was able to successfully bring Starlight back to her normal self. At first I thought that spending time with her friends was the key to helping her, but in the end what she really needed was to be shown that she has done more good for both them and other ponies than she thought.

Starlight now has her own throne and the two of us even learned more about how we feel about each other.

Yours truly, Twilight Sparkle

P.S.

You’re suspicions turned out to be correct. I will let you know when the time comes.

As soon as she finished writing the letter she rolled it up and sealed it before setting it aside so she could send it out tomorrow.

When she was finished with the letter she approached her bed ready to turn in for the night but was stopped by knocking on her bedroom door. Twilight walked over to her door and opened it, revealing Starlight standing on the other side.

Starlight had changed her mane style back to what it was before Rarity changed it. Although Starlight did like what Rarity did, she preferred the wavy style she had been wearing since not long after she had started living in the castle. “Hi, Twilight.”

“Hi. What are you doing here, Starlight? I thought you would have gone to bed by now.”

“I just wanted to thank you for everything. I really am grateful.”

“You’re welcome, Starlight. And I’m glad you’re back to your normal self.”

“So am I.” Starlight let out a yawn as her sleepiness began to catch up to her. “Well I’m going to turn in. Good night, Twilight.” As she began to leave she was stopped by a hoof placed gently on her shoulder.

“Hey, Starlight. Since you’re already here, how about you sleep with me tonight?”

A light blush made its way across Starlight’s face. Even though she and Twilight were dating now she wasn’t sure if she was ready to share a bed with her. Starlight thought about it for a moment before making her decision. “Sure. That sounds nice, Twilight.” Starlight followed Twilight over to the bed, closing the door behind her. Twilight pulled back the covers and the two crawled in. Starlight gave Twilight a kiss on the cheek before saying “Goodnight, Twilight.”

Twilight gave Starlight her own kiss on the cheek before replying “Goodnight, Starlight.”

“Hey, Twilight?”

“Yes, Starlight?”

“Do you think you could show me that spell you used to talk to me in Canterlot tomorrow?”

“Sure thing.”

And with that, the two of them drifted off to sleep.

Author's Note:

The Story is now complete.

I originally didn’t plan on having this be a shipfic but while thinking about what the best way to end the story would be the scene between Twilight and Starlight in the previous chapter came to me and the story became what it is now.

When I first came up with this story I planned on having it focus on Starlight spending time with her friends with each chapter focusing on her and one of the Mane 6, but I wasn’t able to come up with a satisfying ending.

As you can see there is one thing I left unaddressed in this story. That is because I do have an idea for a sequel, but we’ll see if that actually goes anywhere. I’ll likely end up doing it.

Comments ( 30 )

8549467
You want to collaborate on a story with Starlight and Twilight? No diapers have to be involved!

8549538
I don’t know, if you want diapers involved let me know. What if Twilight regrets the fact she released the pillars without thinking about the consequences and Starlight has to comfort Twilight.

What would you like to do?
Maybe we can bounce around ideas until we get one we both like.

8549816
That does sound interesting. May need to be fleshed out a bit.

As for the diaper thing, I’m not really sure.

8549964
Or Maybe a diaper one, where Starlight copes with her foalhood drama by being a foal. Trusting Twilight, Starlight tells her what is going on. Twilight treats her like a foal and begins to enjoy taking care of Starlight.

8550020
Sounds interesting. If we were to do that one then you should know that the farthest I’d be willing to go is wetting.

8551336
So how would we split the work up?

8551602
How about we do a roleplay and convert it into a story? Then we can responsible for converting our characters actions into story.

8551751
Where do you want to do it ?

8551934
Doesn’t really matter to me.

Love the story. I am a big fan of shipping Starlight with Twilight. The two are just really cute/adorable together. They're pretty much made for each other.

Heck, anytime they are in an episode together, they do something that really encourages a matchup between the two. 😊 Like, I think we have seen more hugs between these two then between any other two characters.

I absolutely love this story. You really captured how the characters were feeling throughout the entire fic. There is no reason for you to give any warnings about this being your first story, it is among the best I've read on here.

Hi great story really enjoyed it I hope you will continue

It was a bit ham-fisted at times.
Felt really rushed at the end.

BUT

The idea was amazing. And I really liked the progression of the story. Just need details. lots and lots of details. For every story, you need to know the "brand of the beer, and the name of the dog". Just a little quote that helps me to add those little details.

9525926
I try not to rush things but if I do it’s likely because of inexperience. Honestly as long as the story turns out good and people like it then that’s all that matters to me.

Thank you for the Great Glim Glam Story. Fim fiction has a criminally low amount of Great Glimmer Fics. so thank you for the good read.^^

I like the idea of the story, even if I felt the presentation was a little lacklustre. Despite that, I enjoyed reading and cackled once or twice.

What suspicions did celestia have?

10745456
Ohh. I’ll be sure to read it when I have the chance.

10745460
Okay. And as for what Celestia suspected, that is related to what the tree showed Twilight.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted Mar 30th, 2021

10745466
So she suspected that the tree would show her visions?

10745573
No. What the tree showed Twilight and what Celestia suspected are the same thing.

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