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FluttersForeva


Brony/Pegasister since 2015

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Twilight Sparkle and Flash Sentry have been dating for 1 year now. But Twilight discovers that she has feelings for somepony else and that she wants to break up with Flash, but her friends help her out for her date and she dreads telling them. And how will they react? And how will she tell her special somepony that she has feelings for her?

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Comments ( 8 )

As I said on the authors note in the last chapter, I personally think this story could improve alot more. It was mainly gonna be about Twilight breaking up with Flash but then I got more into the admitting to friends part.

Starlight looked disappointed, but she excepted the fact that she wasn't getting an answer.

I think you meant to put accepted.

it feels... a bit rushed, the first and second chapters were great but the third? it went by faster than sonic the hedgehog, oh well, good story overall.

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I really didn't know what else to write about in that chapter.

This was such a sweet fic, thank you ^^

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