The girls are all having a slumber party at Twilight's castle. All seems to be going just fine, until Rainbow Dash breaks her wing. After this happens she gets help from Fluttershy. After seeing how much the pony cared, Rainbow starts to feel strange and starts to blush whenever she communicates with her. Is Dashie starting to fall in love?
(BTW, if you don't ship FlutterDash then don't read this story.)
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pls give me feedback or tips to improve
Is this story incomplete or not? The tag says incomplete but the fourth chapter says final chapter.
8669373
yeah how do i get rid of that?
8669373
wait nvm xD
8669379
Click the "edit" button above your story's title, and then scroll down until you find "Status" and select complete.
Such a cute story. Love it.
Overall pretty nice. I thought the romantic aspect of the wing-mending scene and the telephone scene were done really well. You could improve by learning to add more detail, but the story underneath is very enjoyable.
And I sent you a list of corrections and suggestions via PM since it was a little long to post here.
8669482
glad u like it ;)
Noice so far.
I thought that it was perfect
Just typing for the sake of typing......
Nuuuuu, the story was so good
until.......
this:
This story was so amazing! I love how descriptive your style is and how it brings out so much emotion! You've written a truly wonderful Flutterdash story!
too*
8670158
Yeah sorry about that, I wanted to end on a surprising note xD
8670164
ty :)
A nice idea hidden underneath rushed writing, and that ending ...
8669482
ty
8671122
Sorry, I'll try my best to improve, as I have said in authors note it's my first ever story.
8671125
No need to apologise. Very few first stories are ever good.
Aww
8671125
Kinda rushed but sorta cute too. Though the ending was a bit of a cliché joke tbh.
This was an amazing Flutterdash story!
tish is great i love it