Cannot believe how long it's been since I visited this website for the first time. Oh how times fly... :(
Dash and Flutters have been friends ever since they were fillies. But being a special somepony was something completely new. But here they were, one year of being together. So both of them prepare for the big event. After all, love is a beautiful thing.
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Cute story is cute. Nice to see more cute Flutterdash. I do however wish you had expanded upon their day and time together.
Because this was really short.
A simple look into the first moment of them being more than friends. Then their first anniversary. It all was so short that it hardly felt like a celebration. A gift exchange from Fluttershy to Dash that carried the moment in time of their first kiss. ...okay, cool. What next? Did they enjoy the rest of the day together? Dash showing off to Fluttershy? Snuggles? Flying together? What about going out and enjoying their anniversary somewhere?
You get a upvote. But I don't think this fic has enough meat on it to be worth a fave.
It's not a bad attempt at a first story on this site. Since you managed to write something sweet and centered on such a great ship I would welcome more stories from you if any further ideas come to you. But please try to build on moments to make it feel more than the bare minimum. It will be more fun to read and write.