Fluttershy's animals are concerned about her so they enlist Rainbow's help to comfort her. Not sure what's wrong, Rainbow takes Fluttershy to the clouds to stargaze until Fluttershy is ready to talk.
This story is a preship flutterdash story. Just something I wrote when I couldn't sleep. I've been writing fics for a long while now, but this is probably my first ever non-canon relationship story.
Cover art: I woke up to find my daughter drew this last night. She's only 7. I didn't show her my fic but I did at some point mention I wanted a picture of Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy on a cloud. I never mentioned cuddling. On a whim she drew this and I had to use it for cover art. So yes, my cover art is by a 7-year-old.
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Very short, simple, and very sweet. Just the way I like things.
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Thanks so much for the comment. :) That made my day.
Overall, a decent story. However, one thing to note: Angel is a male bunny.
A really great story all around. Didn't feel rushed and the conversations really did feel natural.
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I will fix that when I get home. Thank you.
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Thank you! I struggled with the pacing but my editor helped a lot! I'm glad it paid off.
Really glad to see that story was received positively!
Well done!
Your cover-art is the reason I decided to give this a read. I'm not disappointed! Nice job!
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I’m glad the cover-art brought you in and I am so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting.
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Me too. I get so nervous about posting so I'm glad people have enjoyed it so far. Thanks again for all your help.
Well, if it's any consolation, the cover art you've got is better than anything I could do. I'm nineteen, going on twenty, and yet I can't do better than stick figures. ...There's a reason I chose photography as my preferred form of art.
Rather short, but very sweet.
Certainly would be nice to see this continued.
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It is better than I could do, too. Photography sounds like a good plan.
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Thanks for commenting. I needed to write short and not get lost in a long story but I am open to expanding in a sequel.