After a tragic accident leaves Rainbow Dash in the hospital, she is scared of flying. But will Fluttershy's kindness help her reach the skies once again?
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vexinkora
I love friendship is magic and fanfiction, though I am a slow writer lol
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The description says "Do not read this"
Dear God why is the first paragraph a giant Pokemon Puzzle League chain block?!
I would recommend making these revisions to the description:
1744664Aha!
You need to proof read this before you upload it.
Ahhh an RD gets vertigo fic will read later
Great premise, it is certainly in my to-read list.
1744895I have a friend that proof reads my stuff because I hink it is better for finding mistakes and she said it was okay.
yes I apologize for messing up the description.
1745451think
3 words. Ah-may-zing.
Now, time to get a bit serious tone, now, I really like this story and somehow, I can't really understand why it's somehow got a balanced like/dislike but don't let it put you down, Because you've got more likes now, friend.
1745867Thank you and I guess my grammar is the issue this time. I just don't get why my earlier stories are doing so much better than my later ones
I want to get good at shipping. Are you sure there is nothing that sticks out super bad about it? I enjoy feedback
1746034 Like other people would say, proofread it. It'll give you a lot of more likes. Trust me, people don't like doing it but if you wanna get likes, you'd best do it.
1746093I have a friend that proofreads my stories and she said it was fine
If a proofreader tells you your fic is 'fine', then you need a new proofreader.
Likely meant well, but -everyone- has errors in their fics, and those come out to haunt you. I've read about halfway through and picked out a number of spots that could be fixed, including a few synonym and grammar errors, plus some other stuff that could be tweaked.
Still like the premise, just needs tinkering. I don't mind doing a bit of pre-reading and stuff for you, ifn you like. You can wing me a PM if you'd like me to.
1762034I would appreciate that and thank you for liking the premise. Yes I suppose I should get a new one, she got me into fanfiction so I thought I'd let her do it if she wants.
1763334
Finals are kicking me in the teeth just now, but I -will- get to this, I promise!
In the meantime, have some hugs.
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1768793yay hugs are cool