With the war of Nightmare Moon drawing to a close, Princess Celestia sends one of her most prized disciples, Researcher Twilight Sparkle, to solve the mystery of a powerful magical weapon with the capability to rid unicorns of their magic. But how will Researcher Twilight react to find that this weapon may not be a weapon at all, but a living breathing farm filly in the north, only wishing to be left alone?
??? whats with the big space there??? >.> although interesting story 6/10
The Alt Universe may need a bit more explaining at the beginning, and I think the prose could be tightened up, but I really like the premise and plot. Hope you do continue this as I certainly like it.
hmm....