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Daww! I've never read this ship before, but I totally agree with it! I felt like this story was well delivered, and the character structure was pretty good. Great job on this dude/dudette! Keep up the good work! Everyone's favorite Derp horse ~
Why do I feel that Starlight and Trixie are rough fully making out on the Cutie Map table?
7970657 That's a story for another day, mon ami.
You seem to like writing about characters I don't tend to enjoy lol. But this was an enjoyable read. A cute little excursion, interesting seeing Starlight all awkward and unsure of herself and acting like a fool. She usually looks so sure of herself and smug. Interesting to see her like this. Also loved the bits with Spike and Twilight in the beginning. Spike is a little savage, gotta love him for that. Another nice read by you. There were a lot of dialogue interruptions/descriptors. Some of them just felt a little awkward, I'm not sure how to describe it. The descrptions given were nice, but I guess the way they interjected felt a little off. Either way, a nice cute short read.
What a lovely couple those two are.
Cute.
Loved this story! It was hilariously cute and Starlight fumbling over herself in the confession, she couldn't have done a better job of messing it up. I really enjoyed how you ended this story too. The beautiful failure of a date that they had gone on would have been quite the thing to see. :)
Love it!
Well that was pretty adorable. I loved extremely nervous Starlight, you wrote her really well, and I could easily imagine her being as awkward as you had her here. Nice job!
How was it her fault?