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Moonking


Praise the moon and the princess https://www.patreon.com/Battlelord

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Dude, this is amazing! I think this is the only legit Future Gohan fic here! I expect great things from you from what I've just read. :twilightsmile:

I am starting to like the concept of this story, I hope to see more of this. Seems legit.

Like it so far and it does seems legit like since there are more universes gohan in trucks timeline gets sent to equestria after the changed it or when the (forgot his title) but he runs all the universes destroyed trucks timeline if someone did put him somewhere else on repacutions. I just hope u continue this story I've seen so many people do a dbz and just drop it even if its good so I'm not going to get my hopes up (probably still am :twilightblush:) but seem good tho got my attention

Another Dragon Ball Z fanfiction that cool . Let see what happens next chapter .

I'll gonna read it later, but following story :3

We need more Mirai Gohan fics

“SPECIAL BEAM CONNON!”

“TRIE BEAM.”

“DISTOUCTOTE DISK!’

Dafuq? Are you an idiot?

Very interested to see how this turns out but I strongly suggest getting someone to proofread for you.

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some people make mistake dude, take a chill pill, yeesh. :ajbemused:

This story has gone off with a great start and I have always been a Gohan fan for the whole dragon ball series and always wanted to see a Gohan in equestria story and I can only hope you continue with this awesome story.

KO awesome chapter, hope Discord will learn an important friendship lesson to trust others and to having more than one friend like Fluttershy. Seem Gohan has made himself home and ready for new adventures. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

Great story so far but you really need to edit your stuff better or find an editor because the grammar is so bad in places it's painfull to read.
That said I'm enjoying the story and can't wait for more.

Pretty good man! Just need to clean up some simple misspells and grammar mistakes, but pretty good.
Please just take your time in developing. Longer chapters like this last one

Geez Moonking, do you really have to make Discord an asshole like that, I like the guy. I mean he changed his ways on season four when he turned his friends over to Tirek, and karma finally came back and bit him when Tirek betrayed Discord. You could've made Discord be suspicious and keep an eye on Gohan to see if he causes any trouble and eventually open up to him.

Make friends is that really hard . Discord did pick on Tree huggers argue by Fluttershy try make friends get it next also same problem Spike and Big Mac try friendly to him hard to get it and now is Gohan . Oh my God now what to do with Discord make him get it .

Guess I didn't notice the anthro tag. Good story though, I'll keep reading!
:fluttershysad: Is Discord going to be a villain again?

Excellent work so far, but it's a bit tough to read with the different spelling and grammar problems. It just kind of detracts from the story. I don't know, maybe it's just me being an English teachers kid, but, if you'd like, I'd be happy to edit for you if you need help.

Your story is good but man would it kill you to grammar check it.

KO awesome chapter, didn't think Discord will go that far to keep Fluttershy since she is the only friend he EVER made in centuries though not sure if Gohan is willing to show some mercy. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

I’m loving this story but you really should get someone to edit your chapters. Just little fixes here and there. A second set of eyes can change a story from being good to being great. So far so good though!

oh hes gonna go SS :O hope discord gets his ass beaten!

Awesome story so far but why dont you let their be a herd it multiple female with one male it normal in the animal kingdom

Quick question is he still super smart or what

This needs a x-over tag, dude

A Mirai Gohan fanfiction? This is something new!
Though, as epic as this is so far, Ssj Mirai Gohan is rather unlikely to beat Discord.

KO awesome chapter, glad to see Gohan and Discord have settled their differences finding to have common ground than they thought and Spike is going to go through some tough training from his new master. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

gohan is cool too bad he is useless now

All I ask is plz take your time with the romance part, and I hope u don't bring other past DBZ characters.

Hey is this dead or you just taking your time

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No, work is keeping me busy. my boss is making me train the newbies.

I looked at Spike and started to think about it. "I guess if I pushed my power to the max I could destroy a plant with one attack." I heard glass break and looked over at Discord. His glass of chocolate milk as his eye fell out of his head with his jaw on the ground. Rainbow and Applejack looked at me with wide eyes. Rarity and Fluttershy had fainted and was being held up by both Pinkie and Twilight. Both of them were looking at me like I just slapped them.

Anyone can destroy a plant by flicking their wrist. I beleive you mean planet, with an E

Super sayian 2 has electricity flowing around the aura so he never went 2 just 1

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Umm, mate? If you read it, he never stated he went ss2, just to his max then super sayian then back down.

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Gohan, destroyer of mountain
Falls to the might of a common house plant

Not bad. Spike should have a form like Super Saiyan. To make him special. I can see like Garble brings a ton of Dragons and Gohan and Spike fend them off. Gohan takes most of them while Garble and maybe another dragon attack his friends and threatens to kill then. Something snaps inside Spike and he gets his own Super form.

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he talked about ss2 and being as this is WAY after cell he would have ss1 ss2 and mystic but a couple of them asked to see ss2 and im assuming he showed them mystic instead

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If this is future gohan only ssj1 before he died

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he stated he went ssj 2 training on king kais planet after dieing and before being revived.

Is there a chance that discords daughter is eris and is she going to be found?

Never thought I'd see the day that Discord would act like a Karen ^>^;

Did not expect to see this. Nice lil chapter.

Great Chapter!
Hahaha Sorry Spike I can't help it hahaha

welcome back

I'm really enjoying this story, I really hope to see more in the future

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