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Damn... Just damn
KO just curious, is there gonna be any sex scene in this story?
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Maybe later in the story
Just keep trying l hope you doing better .
a combination of coco sunny master jirou toriko and zebra in 1 vile...the universe is fucked
ps: thanks for reminder alternate dawn
uh realy op much!
I got lost half way through this get a spell checker!
Huh. This is pretty good. I give this a like and can't wait for more.
You have to decide if this story is going to be first person, or third person, point of view.
Don't keep jumping between them. It ruins the structure of the story.
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Thanks for the advice
Well done someone add like your story now . You working hard today good job but I will add favorite your story wait for your new chapter .
Great story so far, and I feel it may surpass this story. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/344657/dont-get-cocky
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Nope that story too good
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Never give up, dude.
I'll leave a like because it's well written, but I don't think I'll be following this.
There's too much going on with the main character and he's STARTING OUT over-powered.
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Thks I guess
Great story and I think it is well written but I’m curious, is this character going to start a herd in this story with characters like the main six and the princesses or just one character like Harmonia or someone else
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We will see in the near future
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Why do I fill like you got some ideas from Don't get cocky and even if u didn't I still love this story cause it reminds me of it before it stopped
So far this has earned a favorite and you have earned a new follower
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i hope he makes a harem of the princesses, harmonia, and the main six... why because he is the main character
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Forgot to put this in prev comment, but i like this story so far so i'll fav plus follow the story, and you. And wait for more of this story. (^_^)
I LOVE THIS
Vegito!? op, gg, plz nerf.
Maybe this can help a bit:
https://writingcommons.org/chapters/style/sentence-structure
Wut...your shipping him with the tree of Harmony?
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Maybe
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*Stares in slight disgust but is also slightly turned on* go on maybe I just might search up "plunder seed x tree of Harmony porn"
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You know. All things that vegito never had.
The Mary Sue is strong with this one.
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Force sensitive
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*Smirks while licking potatoe*
Is this story based on.... I forgot the name but the guy's main character is displaced King Toriko with nearly all the powers you have now?
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Eh maybe but it would take ahwhile
MORE!!
Sweet love this chapter!👏
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Thank you !
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gutes Kapitel mein Freund (german) (^_^)
Good job ! Here your promise add like favorite your story . But are you sure keep lying everypony find out about this .
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? What do you mean
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I mean telling about planet destroy and his parents die what happens when Apple Jack find out caught Vegito lying everything but I realize she wasn't there that mean he safe .
Forget about what I said please continue your story is safe . Sorry I rushed to telling you .
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Umm okay
Good job I like it keep it up