KO awesome chapter, hope Discord will learn an important friendship lesson to trust others and to having more than one friend like Fluttershy. Seem Gohan has made himself home and ready for new adventures.
Great story so far but you really need to edit your stuff better or find an editor because the grammar is so bad in places it's painfull to read. That said I'm enjoying the story and can't wait for more.
Pretty good man! Just need to clean up some simple misspells and grammar mistakes, but pretty good. Please just take your time in developing. Longer chapters like this last one
Geez Moonking, do you really have to make Discord an asshole like that, I like the guy. I mean he changed his ways on season four when he turned his friends over to Tirek, and karma finally came back and bit him when Tirek betrayed Discord. You could've made Discord be suspicious and keep an eye on Gohan to see if he causes any trouble and eventually open up to him.
Make friends is that really hard . Discord did pick on Tree huggers argue by Fluttershy try make friends get it next also same problem Spike and Big Mac try friendly to him hard to get it and now is Gohan . Oh my God now what to do with Discord make him get it .
Excellent work so far, but it's a bit tough to read with the different spelling and grammar problems. It just kind of detracts from the story. I don't know, maybe it's just me being an English teachers kid, but, if you'd like, I'd be happy to edit for you if you need help.
KO awesome chapter, hope Discord will learn an important friendship lesson to trust others and to having more than one friend like Fluttershy. Seem Gohan has made himself home and ready for new adventures.
Great story so far but you really need to edit your stuff better or find an editor because the grammar is so bad in places it's painfull to read.
That said I'm enjoying the story and can't wait for more.
Pretty good man! Just need to clean up some simple misspells and grammar mistakes, but pretty good.
Please just take your time in developing. Longer chapters like this last one
Geez Moonking, do you really have to make Discord an asshole like that, I like the guy. I mean he changed his ways on season four when he turned his friends over to Tirek, and karma finally came back and bit him when Tirek betrayed Discord. You could've made Discord be suspicious and keep an eye on Gohan to see if he causes any trouble and eventually open up to him.
Make friends is that really hard . Discord did pick on Tree huggers argue by Fluttershy try make friends get it next also same problem Spike and Big Mac try friendly to him hard to get it and now is Gohan . Oh my God now what to do with Discord make him get it .
Guess I didn't notice the anthro tag. Good story though, I'll keep reading!
Is Discord going to be a villain again?
Excellent work so far, but it's a bit tough to read with the different spelling and grammar problems. It just kind of detracts from the story. I don't know, maybe it's just me being an English teachers kid, but, if you'd like, I'd be happy to edit for you if you need help.
Your story is good but man would it kill you to grammar check it.
Never thought I'd see the day that Discord would act like a Karen ^>^;