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Another LiE fic.
8066763 I'm trying out a new editing program and I wanted to try it out on my new story.
8066763 What does "L" stand for?
KO awesome chapter, Troy seem to be doing well in his in Equestria now he'll use those skills to protect his new home and friends.
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Nice, now he just needs the rest of the crusaders and tiara and silver spoon and his herd will be complete.
This is a crossover, right?
I only have one word for you. "EDITOR." You need one and this story could be so much more if it was not so hard to read. It takes me several tries to read one sentence because there are so many errors, not only in spelling, but also in grammar. I hate coming across as a "grammar nazi," but grammar is very important and so is spelling. Without those elements in line the clear communication of ideas and feelings is impossible.
did you click on the submit button by accident
more please
I look forward to reading the next chapter. This story is quite good. Keep up the great work.
more please
continue with the great chapters
check your grammar through out the story
Why didn't you respond to my comment?
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not really
Oh man. Fingers crossed the sweeties folks are down with their daughters choice for coltfriends. Great chapter by the way.
so epic
Shinning is commiting treason by sealing off the castle from a princess.
Loving the story.
Sometimes giving someone to hate can be a mercy. Hopefully Velvet's hatred will taper off over time.
At least shinning died with some dignity.
king Troy
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I can answer that my friend. The L stands for lame as in he or she thinks my story is lame.
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Everyone has the right to their opinion.
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Jesus I see you everywhere!
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What do you mean?
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That's a good thing right?
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Probably.
That's. Hot
He said son, I know it's probably nothing, but I'm getting a little paranoid on these things
is this story gonna update soon
MORE MORE GIVE US MORE
When's the update coming up
More we need more!
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We have an update
It got kinky very fast. But good update.
I do not understand why is he sticking with the TV show story when he's from Earth he's a regular person that went to a comic convention any got the two swords from the merchant you should tell the truth.
Wow so far as those looking okay can't wait for the next chapter hope that it comes out really soon want more it's really good .
Wow, that was a bit rude don't you think? Attacking her cause she laughed at him? Even if he did explain his reasoning.
Are the females that has been captured will be saved and is the who is after troy is one character of imperial Arms show?
i have to agree are the females going to be saved and who is troy talk to one from imperial Arms show aka Akame ga kill or is it from my little pony?
No, Troy is a random name I picked from a name site. There's no one by that name in either show.
I got to ask do you need an editor someone to help you check over your writing and spelling in this story it's kind of bad killing every single sentence but I like the story and I hate to see you go down like this can you please keep up the good work.
Huh I did not expect this to happen