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Moonking


Praise the moon and the princess https://www.patreon.com/Battlelord

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well Dis going to be fun

Recited? You sure you don't mean Retired?

I will add it to my list. Hope it will live long enough...

Statement: You have MY interest.

I had about five inches and he had long darker fur in his forearms with a bread starting to grow off his chin. He was in a pair of work jeans without a shirt and I could see he was no lightweight if he wanted to fight. But my shoulders or arms may be larger than his.

Correction: beard
Alternative: maybe

I once had this story up the deleted it out of spit since a reader demanded I write it one way in a pm.

LOL. I've made similar mistakes in my description before. Grammar is a bitch eh.

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May be is the correct grammar
Example this may be the biggest fish I've ever seen.

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Statement: While I realize that it still bothers me. But I will fix it anyway.

Hmm, a little fast paced, a few line errors here and there and some spelling errors but over all, I'm intrigued :moustache:

Una

Interesting. Well at least he's no pushover like most of the oc that appear in the mlp world.

You forget to put anthro tag

Aside from 1 or 2 nitpicks, this looks interesting.

This story looks good, you have caught my interest.

This looks dope as fuck

Not bad so far can't wait for the next chapter

i approve of this story,please continue :eeyup::pinkiehappy:

Isn't it against the rules to repost a story you deleted?

Forget what that guy thought this looks good and not to mention hes no pushover maybe a little gun happy but still keep it up. Also if someone tries to force u to go in a direction u dont want to go ignore them cause everyone's a critic

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Not sure but hopefully not, I don't want to banned for two weeks again.

Some spell checking and this could be the start of a great story.

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You could always continue it on another platform, I'm sure people are still interested in it.

Other than a few misspelings it was pretty good.

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TF do you mean by "again"?

The mare orange mare what a Stetson.

???

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He was banned and his story demonking was removed

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What was the reason for the story being taken down?

Use your guns. Your a gunslinger with magic. Use it

Trust me this is leading to something good.
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I have a feeling that Jack will put a bullet in one of the princess if this keeps up

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I don't, because both of them are literally being brats, well not put a bullet in them per say, but try to scare them with the guns

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Oh i see what you getting there they are acting like snobbish nobles

Comment posted by Shadowsoffate42 deleted May 8th, 2019

Is he the regular gunslinger or the op holy shit one

regular no power beyond the body he's in so only magic and flite.

I love the concept of this story. A cowboy goes to Equestria, becomes a literal GOD, and desptite everyone telling him otherwise, he just says "fuck it" and goes to live on a farm. This story is great, not just for the concept, but for the execution.

Well, that escalated quickly.

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a pretty egregious case of plagiarism.

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Isn't it called "trigger happy"

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Wouldnt trigger happy where hes shooting at everything and he hasn't shot anyone yet just pointed his guns

"Now, you listen to me, Jack. You risked your life without a second thought to protect part of our family without a second thought. I saw you when they brought you out of the fields. You were cut up and bleeding everywhere, and I knew as sure as my life if you'd not been there I would have lost my youngest granddaughter to that monster, and the other would have lost parts of their family too. You think you need to be invited to our dinner table?"

I wasn't sure if I should say yes or no.

"I'm saying this once and only once sonny. There will never come a day your not welcome to this table or this farm. Far as I'm concerned your part of the Apple clan now. Now get yourself a plate and sit down dinner getting cold."

Well said, grammar aside.

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