I had about five inches and he had long darker fur in his forearms with a bread starting to grow off his chin. He was in a pair of work jeans without a shirt and I could see he was no lightweight if he wanted to fight. But my shoulders or arms may be larger than his.
Forget what that guy thought this looks good and not to mention hes no pushover maybe a little gun happy but still keep it up. Also if someone tries to force u to go in a direction u dont want to go ignore them cause everyone's a critic
On my read later list...
Recited? You sure you don't mean Retired?
I will add it to my list. Hope it will live long enough...
Statement: You have MY interest.
It's high nooooooon
Correction: beard
Alternative: maybe
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LOL. I've made similar mistakes in my description before. Grammar is a bitch eh.
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May be is the correct grammar
Example this may be the biggest fish I've ever seen.
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Statement: While I realize that it still bothers me. But I will fix it anyway.
Hmm, a little fast paced, a few line errors here and there and some spelling errors but over all, I'm intrigued
More please
Interesting. Well at least he's no pushover like most of the oc that appear in the mlp world.
You forget to put anthro tag
This story looks good, you have caught my interest.
This looks dope as fuck
Can I expect more
Not bad so far can't wait for the next chapter
i approve of this story,please continue
Isn't it against the rules to repost a story you deleted?
Love this story
Forget what that guy thought this looks good and not to mention hes no pushover maybe a little gun happy but still keep it up. Also if someone tries to force u to go in a direction u dont want to go ignore them cause everyone's a critic
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Not sure but hopefully not, I don't want to banned for two weeks again.
Some spell checking and this could be the start of a great story.
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You could always continue it on another platform, I'm sure people are still interested in it.
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TF do you mean by "again"?
???
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He was banned and his story demonking was removed
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What was the reason for the story being taken down?
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a pretty egregious case of plagiarism.
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Isn't it called "trigger happy"
interesting but this REALLY needs an editor.
there are some pointless lines, wrong words, etc.
Heh, when i look at big macs and jack's encounter i cant help but think:
*Guitar riff
*Eagle caw
(Choir) MANLINESS
That how you start a broship. I hope he makes a herd.
Regarding the picture of Big Mac, why is he so hairy?
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best I could find
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He looks perfect. Also it kinda looks like he has a mini-beer gut.