well Dis going to be fun

Aside from 1 or 2 nitpicks, this looks interesting.

Other than a few misspelings it was pretty good.

Interesting idea, but you could use an editor.

I shot.

Shoot**

This has my attain I can't wait to see where this goes.

"Twi I think the Princess needs to hear about this now."

Twilight... what did you do this time?