More please

Use your guns. Your a gunslinger with magic. Use it

Also GOOD SHIT

Trust me this is leading to something good.
9610941

Great chapter

I have a feeling that Jack will put a bullet in one of the princess if this keeps up

9611007
I doubt that

9611033
I don't, because both of them are literally being brats, well not put a bullet in them per say, but try to scare them with the guns

9611061
Oh i see what you getting there they are acting like snobbish nobles

Is he the regular gunslinger or the op holy shit one

regular no power beyond the body he's in so only magic and flite.

I love the concept of this story. A cowboy goes to Equestria, becomes a literal GOD, and desptite everyone telling him otherwise, he just says "fuck it" and goes to live on a farm. This story is great, not just for the concept, but for the execution.

Well, that escalated quickly.

9614562
Wouldnt trigger happy where hes shooting at everything and he hasn't shot anyone yet just pointed his guns

I put my hat on my hat

Hat-cepsion

This is really hard to read. Slow down and check your work dude.

I put my hat on my hat then walked up to the barn then started to help Applejack move the barrels into storage.

*me trying to wrap my head around this world shattering concept

I put my hat on my hat

Spy: That is a little trick I call... HAT-cellent!

I hope he and the princesses can get to know each other better and one DAT join applejack in a herd .

9924541
They just want the male alicorn dick

Story is good but you need to either re read what you post and/or get an editor. This is getting painful to read; Take a little more pride in your work. If you dont care why should we?

10267487
Now thats too harsh. I find it quite easy to read and theres only minor spelling and grammar issues scatter across it. The way you are saying is that this story is unbearable to read. I find it wonderful. So once again, stop being harsh unless you've written a story.