A blue pegasus pony wakes up in a forest outside of Ponyville, in the magical land of Equestria. She has no idea where she is, or who she is. Join her as she tries to figure out what she used to be, with the help of six of the greatest friends in Ponyville. And who is this dark figure she is dreaming about? Read and find out.
--Side note--
I broke the fourth wall (I think) a few times, to explain why something was maybe a bit off, or a bit too ordinary, and cliched.
Just thought that may warrant some explanation.
I'm nearing the end of my first FanFic. Sorry if it is too short. (LQL JK) I am going to start a new story soon, after I have uploaded the last few chapters. I'm at about 33,000 words at the moment. I think I'll reach the end by about 35-40,000.
Credit to Kody910 for letting me reference 'Scorched' in my epilogue.
--End Note--
well, I've got nothing better to do, here goes nothing.
quite good, couple of mistakes here and there but otherwise really quite good
MOAR!
if...umm...that ok with you 
Well, I can't think of a name either, but you should.
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What mistakes? I'm sorry if it ruined the experience... or... something... but I wish to make it right. Were they spelling or grammar problems? Or problems with the story? I tried to keep it in line with the story of the show as much as possible.
good, good. needs some work, but still
i think- screw what i think. u do ur own thing
928163 No, I appreciate any advice! Please, continue! What can I do to make future stories better? I admit that this one isn't the best. It is the first FanFic I have ever written, and is the longest story EVER that I have written as well. I am just experimenting. It is probably too late to change this one, but if there is anything I can do to make future ones better, please, tell me!
wow good work i'm loving this story!!
How about Love and power
wow nice more plz!!
931212 If you're talking about the Seventh Element, I just felt that love was a bit sappy, and it was a bit late to change Sky's Cutie Mark into a love heart.
931544 Almost finished, just working on the epilogue now. This has been a fun few days writing this.
914482 Done. (Cute video by the way, I LQL'd as soon as it started)
Good show! Are you going to make a 2nd story off of this if you do i have an idea for it.
933662 What is your idea? TELL ME
If... you know... you want to.
933685 spin off abit you made the end to happy so why not throw a new foe that is rit under there noses in the 2nd story
933695 A new bad guy... GENIUS! That way, I could explore the other relationships among the others (With the exception of AJ, who got together with the main character of Scorched) And I could have something else to do for a few more days! YAY! You, my friend are a genius.
Any ideas for the antagonist?
933710 Your chatting with him lol
933720 What do you mean? Include you?
933745 I mean my OC zoom or luke. he come in like sky but he knows all about his past and his falllin GF hit hit
933759 I'll have a look and see what I can do. This is going to be good.
933775 well me OC is in 2 storys lol and in both he's a litte diffent. wow i can't spell lol
919420 just spelling and grammar issues, only minor, nothing to worry about.
Yay done! I do have a few thoughts.
I felt you had a good idea and story but to me it was very rushed. Instead of just telling us what happened, try to make us see through character's eyes and emotions. I can understand wanting to share this quickly though.
All in all I enjoyed it but if you are writing a 2nd part, part try more descriptions! I look forward to seeing more.
941886 Thanks, I have posted The Second Story Of Sky Blue, and I'm working on it at the moment. Thanks for the advice, but may I ask, when you say 'try more descriptions', do you mean of the characters, or of the events in the story? One more thing, how was the storyline itself? That was my biggest worry as I wrote. I have only seen season one and the first two episodes of season two. Did I do a good job with it? You seem pretty good with these things.
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I guess descriptions was a bad word (I was at work on my phone) What I mean is in a story there is nothing more that I love when you get to get behind the eyes of the characters the author has created and be sucked into it emotionally. Like say when there is a twist I noticed you would say what it was, they would all have
reactions, and then you would just move right along after that. To me that makes it unsatisfying and frustrating. I want to know what some of the others (or the relevant ones) think and how they get through that thought process, and pulling on some of the lessons they have learned from the show.
Hopefully for what its worth that will help you out!
Also you really should watch the 2nd season! Some good episodes in there
947117 Like I think I said, I've only seen first two episodes and yesterday I saw This Day Aria. Thanks for clearing that up btw, I was wondering what you meant. So instead of saying, for instance, 'They wer all angry' or something like that, I would write it from their perspectives, and write what they were thinking? Sorry if I misunderstood, I only really got into writing about a week and a half ago, although none if that stuff was as large as this. Like I said, I am experimenting at the moment. I'm not used to implementing these things yet. Sorry if it ruined it for you. I will try and implement what you said into my next story. Rhanks again. Btw, writing this on my phone too, so sorry if it is a bit hard to follow.
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No worries! At least you have actually written your story! I'm still stuck on the whole 'sit down and write' part.
Just keep writing and you will learn as you go! Its like when I read a webcomic and watch the artist go from the art skill in the beginning to the art skill when I catch up. Only get better with more practice.
i think she may just be the pony incarnation of chuck norris...
1026500 Sky Blue, you mean? What do you mean?
good story! at times it seemed confusing but made more sense as the story went on. such as skyblue having magic but then you explained how the 7th element could give pegasi magic. cant wait for updates to your other stories!
1147229 You'll get them! And, it was meant to be a bit confusing. I tried to do what other authors do, in that I tried to make the reader wonder what the buck was going on.
yeah though sometimes i feel that you didnt really get into skys emotions enough, im starting to read the second one and she doesnt seem so attached to rainbow as you would think.
1147286 Oops. I tried to explore that in TSOSB, and TTSOSB, but I guess I was a little off on that one. I can't believe it. It is actually centered around her feelings, and I didn't even do it right.
actually now that im getting into the second one it feels more present
1147380 Ah, good.
well goodnight. cant wait for more of youdash!
So, who thinks that this is the reawakening of discord?
FIRST!!!!!
FIRST!
And shit hits the fan.
Fuck u im not folowing u anymore.