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Xaldon Ajide
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Sorry if this isn't as many updates as you guy's expected however i had to completely reorder my story and i plan on breaking up a few chapters into parts in the future to make them easier to both read and digest and also to improve upon them so their not as broken as they are now anyway I hope you guy's enjoy the new prologue and the month awaited chapter five. Hopefully chapter six wont be as long a wait.
cheers
1407376 umm... thank you
I think that there is a mistake here
this is the same chapter as chapter 2
1407796 scratch that i need to fix this asap thanks. for telling.
edit: there fixed.
cheers.
looking forward to the next chapter
1411354 thanks
Its starts off confusing but definitely sets this story up. Looking forward to seeing how all this came to be.
1411415 Success and thank you for confirming that i was able to set it up right. I was trying to make it semi interesting and I'll try and not let you down. a bit of the action is starting in the next chapter or two. question though is their any way I can make the transition from the future timeline to the past timeline (1st and 2nd chapters) smoother and less confusing?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
cheers
1411430
You did just fine making the transition smooth. It was just a little confusing because all the sudden, there's this new Prologue, and there are these new characters taking on the mane 6's roles. It just threw me for a loop is all.
On a another note, I have a question. I originally found this story while looking for MoonLight strories. Is that where the romance tag comes from, or is there another reason for it?
And for the record, A LOT more then semi interesting. Just saying.
Punctuation. Punctuation punctuation PUNCTUATION DEAR GOD PLEASE. This story has so much potential. Try not to write it like you're in the first grade.
1421819
I already know whats wrong with it what i need is someone to point it out so i know how why and where to fix it along with what needs fixing. this story is jury rigged as much as I can get it without bashing my head into the keyboard in frustration.
Ooh, interesting idea. Nice twist on the first episode.
Well written as well. I'll start reading more when I have time!
(Funnily enough, a small event in MY story is kind of similar! XD)
1738975 really, which part?
Still was a pleasant read.
1786405 thank you!
sounds like a nice Christmas presents to all of us that enjoy this story! plus i didn't notice any basic mistakes throughout the chapter so you must have done a good job when you checked over it!
Seems likely that you wanted 'Luna Est Cor Noctis' (Luna is the heart of the night). The current title reads more like 'Luna is the heart by night.'
1786506 ah thanks fixing it now. what i was really trying for was 'The moon is the heart of the night.' do you know the proper translation for that?
1786461 thanks for reading it. and letting me know I did a good self edit.
As always an another great chapter!
1786506
what language is that in, if i may ask?
1786623
Luna is the word for the moon, so it is already correct. And profitably ambiguous. I was just taking a guess about which meaning you intended.
1787755
Latin.
1787198 thanks
1787945
thanks
the fuck im so confused mainly because im trying to figure out whos on whos side i dont trust pinky
1789942 need any help?
well well well
damn twilight is in trouble
I might never get around to reading this, but +1 just for using a proper Latin title.
1850824 thanks
actually it was thanks to someones help that the title was made proper before hand it was Luna Est Core Nocte. How id I get it so wrong?
Oh well at least I tried.
Another good chapter, but there are a few grammar error here and there.
1850858
Luckily there are plenty of Latin nerds like me hanging around MLP fanfiction websites for whatever reason. 
Egads! Well at least you got it sorted out.
Eh, yeah, way too AU for my liking. Way too AU. Plus, Trixie being the protege in the first chapter just made it that much harder for me to try and read through. Best of luck in your writings.
1850876thanks as I stated in the author's not that will be fixed as well.
1850974 agreed and Google translate helps out a lot to.
cheers
I like this story
(But I still have no idea what's going on
)
1851486 sorry about the confusion.
1851495 It's more down to the fact that I'm easily distracted
1851589 Ah Okay
wow rainbow dash has dirty mind kikikikikikikikiki
LoL!! NEXT!!
1882685? maybe soon. but the scenes are just dragging out on me.
I'd prefer if the story was more canon, I can't even tell who is who in this story
1890489 ah I guess I made it a bit more complicated than it should have been sorry about that however think colors and then think about the cutiemark stories for the main six and how they could have changed if rainbow dash didn't do the sonic Rainboom.
Seems like you made this story longer in detail than what most wanted it be.
A great story none the less but I suspect many did not want a long past to show up.
1974938 yia but the past is required for the reader to fully understand the history and why all of the changes had happened, also I hate plot holes. they just irk me beyond belief so sorry if this story is longer than expected
.
Hey, remember when I said I was confused about what was happening? It may be because it's 4:02AM but all that I understood in that chapter was that Fluttershy went shopping and Rainbow got into some beastiality (if that's even possible when dealing with ponies). Oh well, I want a muffin
2056778 Gah it makes sense. oh Celestia why. I tried to write a simple seven page, three thousand and five hundred word chapter. using a synapses of one page five hundred and forty two words. but instead I get a frigging 20 page monster just over ten thousand words, developed just over a month and a week. Three bucking weeks after it's original due date
. dagnabit. anyway
on a happy note did ya like the chapter? and if you did, what did you like about it?
cheers
2056801 I should probably be sleeping but I'm coherent enough to recognize that there weren't any grammar errors that I could see.
And to be fair I was already confused.
EDIT: I was typing this, forgot what I was doing, then remembered.
2056814 Well at least I did something right this time.
but what is with the long bucking chapters
seriously I shouldn't be able to make them.
anyway cheers
Edit:
anyway Would you mind pointing out where the mix up is, or which chapters it is in? I'd be greatly appreciative.