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Xaldon Ajide


post celestial civil war ... [data courruption] Void NO FURTHER DATA.

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I don't blame you people that dislike the story, I did so myself as well.:twilightsmile:

I think I'm mainly confused.

From what I can gather, Not-Fluttershy is an immortal changeling who can kill with impunity... and that's basically it.

Just remember, me, Gilda, Twilight, and even Zecora are here, and we’ll listen to you

so its in the noctis universe

I think I’ll visit Que- Twilight a bit later,

Interesting..

‘Well Rainbow Dash, at least she’s on the mend. Hopefully the rest of the year remains calm, for her sake.’

Cagnim, 3rd, 999th CR.

Fate is a jerk and always listens.


I didnt like the first chapters either but now we know where blueblood is^^ and we know more about fluttershy backstory in noctis(if this is notis) "Amaryllis" hmmm

3370957 she can, at least if she's up against a weakling like blueblood, and her opponent doesn't know to actually strike deeper into the throat region to actually pierce her exoskeleton like carapace.:twilightsmile:

3370965 indeed it is. I'm going to leave the hints in this story so that anyone that actually chooses to read it can find out themselves. besides it's not like manypeople are going to visit this story other than to give it a big down-vote.:pinkiehappy:

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I think I’ll visit Que- Twilight a bit later,

are you gonna explain that?^^

3371002 Well to put it simply what is the status of the one who leads a hive of changelings?

and that is Twilight to their little group.:twilightsmile:

So for Fluttershy, she's having a wee bit of difficulty trying to ween herself off of the official titles for Twilight's sake and her own as a changeling.:pinkiesmile:

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ah kk
well another explanation would be that twi overachieved her changeling research :rainbowlaugh:
i want to know more of flutters backstory now^^

3371128 you'll have to wait for it to show up in Luna Est Core Noctis I'm afraid. Till then, this is all you'll get.:twilightsmile:

This just seems like a gore another gore for the sake of gore fics like cupcakes was.
Blueblood a pony who hates filth,randomly mutilates a bat to sniff it, then randomly molests a demon fluttershy look-a-alike who kills him. A rainbow dash who I assume is the real rainbow dash is her slave and yes mare thus not calling the guard on her.
What was going through your mind while typing this?

3371464 you should read my other fic, Luna est core Noctis, it should enlighten you somewhat, though I haven't gotten to the part where you'd be fully in the know as to what is going on and why it's happening.:twilightsmile: Suffice to say Blueblood is worse in this world than in cannon, his baser desires have taken a turn for the depraved, and Celestia's Counceling does nothing to halt it, I'm basing this blueblood off the one from 150 days of blueblood. whereas Fluttershy is a changeling and has been for some time. As for Rainbow Dash, think of her more as a mercenary that fell in love with a changeling. :twilightsmile:

Though I do like you're avatar pic, Blueblood and Applejack look like a good couple, I'd write that into my story... buuut the characters have already decided his fate.

Oh god this is terrible what the hell is wrong with you.:pinkiesick::applecry::raritydespair:
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YOU MESSED UP THE TITLE!
It's EVERYPONY, not EVERYONE!

3372673 You should ask Blueblood what is wrong with him. I let my characters write the story for me, not the other way around.:twilightsmile:

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Blueblood doesn't understand Equestrian vocabulary?

What a terrible pony!

3373117 indeed, and that is why Equestrian nobles don't write stories.:twilightsmile:
Or at least aren't allowed to.

3A

SELLING BRAIN-BKEACH FOR TWO BITS A BARREL!

I've been playing too much Dark RP...

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Xaldon isn't a pony, therefore your logic is invalid

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Damnit man, use your title right! It's Luna est cor Noctis, not Luna est core Noctis.:twilightsheepish:

And before you even think that I read this when I said NO several times, I am only here because I got bored and wanted to see what people thought of it.

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And now I'm in the top 5 comments. All of them. :facehoof:

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Dark rp... That's Garry's mod isn't it?

Now onto commenting on the story....
DAFUQ did I just read :I
Crazy guy who thinks he helps people by murdering people and I don't even know, Demonshy? I don't what evil fluttershy is supposed to be. DAFUQ DAFUQ DAFUQ. I'm not even going to hit a single rate button xD

3405223 Off to pony happy land are we?:rainbowwild:

Ok. I see why many wouldnt like this (one mention of gore or rape and e'erpony gets morally flustered) but I dont see why they dont understand it...green fire...pretty obvious changeling ability...put two and two together and its quite simple. Now Im off to read your Luna est cor Noctis to find out what is really going on :) Bye

3442984 Thanks for the Laugh I needed that. Now I may not be at that part of the story yet but I'm working on getting there.:twilightsmile:

Ummmmm I REALLY HATE MONSIEUR BLUEBLOOD

4453497 Oh finish the chapters there's a little treat at the end for you.:twilightsmile:

well i know what to do *grabs sword and goes to blueblood*

8105142 Umm... You'd need either a demonologist or a necromancer to bring him back before you can kill him again.

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