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Xaldon Ajide


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I so so so LOVE NLR stories :D

Great story so far. Looking forward to continue reading.

this holds promise i'll be watching you

1874742>>1874197>>1873923
you guys should be thanking Finite for writing it, i'm just the person that cleans it up and posts it so you guys can read it.:twilightblush:
just waiting on his next chapter so I can clean it and post it for him.:twilightsmile:

Tia knows that Luna knows something...oh boy

Yay shes a vampony now! And Tia is hot on their tail.........oh the suspense!

THIS STORY BUCKING SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1917673 YOUUUUU MADE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2::facehoof: so any suckery is on you:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Finite deleted Jan 7th, 2013

I think Violet is older then she looks, it could explain the expert magic use and the two colours.
I think Violet is possessing some pony :pinkiesmile:

1953929 well the actual author has neglected to let me know any details about how old Violet is however if you want to try ask finite he's the one that drew this all up.

and thanks for the fave.

cheers:twilightsmile:

man Violet you get off on the weirdest shit.

1989197 I know. But her personality seems to be a bit stuck.

1989228
What?! What is he saying?

Excellent chapter. you have me wondering where Luna is to take this. How to deal Celly and her "guards".

Keep up the good work.

1991058 he's saying that Violet has a strange sexual fetish. however it isn't a fetish at all it is just the blessing.

Awww yea Luna is up for some vengeance huh hehe.

I have read all chapters and I must say, this is a damm good Story so far! Waiting for the next Chapter!:twilightsmile:

2152886 As am I When will Finite come out with the next one.:raritydespair:
oh and thanks for the fave:raritystarry:

looking towards the next chapter :yay:

Can't wait for the next chapter!

2648935 neither can I I'm just waiting for the author to actually finish it.:facehoof:

Anyone against Celestia is a friend of mine

“B-B-But?!” The only thing Celestia can say at the time.

I am laughing this entire time. All that would make this better is if Rainbow used her own magic. Oh. I'd have to explain the Rainboom Depth then

“We set up a system for how we direct our power. The three lunar orders; the three bodies are, their call the lunar lawmaking (legislative) branches, lunar law enforce (executive) branches, and lunar court (judicial) branches. The lunar lawmaking (legislative) branch, which includes lunar Congress and lunar state lawmaking (legislative), write the lunar laws. The lunar law enforce (executive) branch, which includes the lunar president and lunar state governors, implement and enforce the lunar laws. The lunar court (judicial) branch, which includes the lunar Supreme Court and other lunar courts, determine whether lunar law is steady and reliable (consistent) with pre-existing lunar laws and whether lunar laws have been violated. Each lunar branch is given oversight over the other two in lunar order to protect against any lunar branch abusing their lunar authority. There is a fourth lunar branch to make sure lunar order is not abused, it’s the lunar ponies, those who are elected into the lunar order office, and report all that is going on in lunar order office. They are called the lunar press, lunar reporters, who tell the lunar people of what goes on in lunar office.” Violet finishes.

Much better than a monarchy under Celestia. Not saying monarchism is bad. Elizabeth is Doing well

“Good, brace thy self.” Violet stood ready. Luna shoots her with her magic. Violet Feeling like she just had been struck with a particularly powerful lightning spell, then the pain turns to pleasure. Her body shudders at the waves of euphoria that course through her, as she feels her thighs grow damper. She had to sit, panting as the feeling concentrated in her hooves and spread up her legs. She fails to fight back a moan as it passes her hips and proceeds up her chest, changing her body figure similar to Equestria’s finest athletes. Violets fur and hair tuck in and change all on its own, her black jet fur gains more of a regal look, as well as a luxurious shine, her mane and tail colors now appear as a violet flame, as a flame from the depth of her mane and tail, their being under an inch of white color, than there to the top changing to a royal violet, blue and purple mix of colors. The same goes for her eyes, starting from the middle a white dot, moving out as a royal violet, blue and purple flame color that seem to glow. Her eyeteeth became elongate and sharpen to threatening points. She was feeling something changing within her as the magic works, finally as it envelops her head she collapses, twitching as her body could no longer take it. Her mouth open in a soundless scream of pleasure as a final pulse course through her body, causing her to climax. Violet lays there for a few moments, panting as the feelings dies down as she basks in the afterglow of both the spell's effects and her own orgasms. She hears Luna sigh as she pulls herself to her hooves, blushing rather profusely. “I just made a filly cum… Oh Celestia this is all wrong…” Luna lowers her head.

Spicy~
Sorry, had to say it. Hahahahaha! This a lot more fun tha- actually, let's not mention, that.

I am enjoying this very much

“…Well… if you ever change your mind, the proposal will remain open. Ah here we are, the kitchen. It was nice chatting with you Violet, but I must get back to business. See you soon.”

Kill her. Slowly.

Why do you like orgasms and magic so much?

“… We understand Celestia.” Luna stare at her plate for a moment then begin to eat.

I understand as well. That I was a fool to let her live.

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