It is 1897. Equestria is at peace and Dusk Shine, a rising star in the fields of science and sorcery has set up shop in the capital of Canterlot, along with his two assistance Barbara and Butterscotch. However dark things are beginning to stir in the east, with news of the intrepid trio reaching the ears of an ancient vampiress who has set her sights on the young cream Pegasus, believing him to be her long lost lover.
As fate brings these two ancient souls together, what shall become of poor Butterscotch? Will he stay firm and bask in the light of day, or shall he fall to the velvety seductions of the night?
Cover Art done by the lovely Alyssa Hartwick
Chapters (10)
that pic reminds me of this
First chapter and i'm already into it... Keep up the great work!
So Bootyfull
7334387 Thank you!
7334470 Deh booty is deh-full!
7334470 I'll have the next chapter up very soon
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The paragraph after this one needs a space
“Dopey Hooves at your service sir.
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Lol. I think that's the first time I've heard an R63 name for Derpy
and...
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any hue, nice start. I particularly liked the interaction between Duskshine and Barbara. Not sure that Spike is really a sassy character, but the r63 version of him/her seems to be done that way often... Or maybe that's just cuz the last one I read with R63 spike was like that XD
Also, Dat NMM duck, u liek that one don't u
7334988 hehehehe Maybe.
I believe this may be misspelled, or I have completely misunderstood the plot of this story.
7335063 Oh! X3 Oh dear... thank you so much for pointing that out! XD
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Awwww you mean it's not about a vampire isosceles bent on seducing Butterscotch? Maybe you could do a spin off....
7335098 No no! That's what the story is about! XD I just misspelled Angel. XD
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But but.... Hypotenuse puns...
7335110 lol! XD Derp.
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Speaking of derps...
7335121 ...
That shouldn't say that. X3
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She's gonna get drool all over the nice castle bridge...
7335132 Fixed it. X3 There shall be no saliva! XD
At least not until a certain vampiress finds a particular cream-colored neck.
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Oooh, now I really need to track this story.
7335140 Yay!!! ^^
7335140 Then she'll probably give him a little love nibble.
Probably... maybe...
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Mmmmmm delicious butterscotch.
7335295 Delicious.
I think that's supposed to be Dusk Shine.
That's "colleague." Unless Butterscotch is suddenly a school.
Also several more typos which were very small.
Anyway, good start. Though what's with all the vampire Fluttercord fics lately? (I know, I should talk, right?)
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Oh derp. Better go fix that one. :P
Yes! XD Come to Butterscotch University! The next step in fanfic-higher education. X3
I've been taking a college English course over the last few weeks. I've been trying to improve my writing, and as you can see there are a lot less typos here then there were in the beginning of Notre Mare.
Thanks DF!
That really does mean a lot. 
Maybe its just a trend going on right now?
I wuv it!
hoping
7347234 Don't worry, it will get better really soon.
Wohoo! Awesome start to your story Quill!:D Very Dracula in this tone, pacing, and structure and more
Soooooo sorry that it took me so long, to not only read this chapter, but also that short excerpt you sent me through PM.
Love the very beginning having the mysterious student narrator narrating the story:3 Though, I feel like you can take this part out:
Tehee Sweetland:3
Onward to the next chapter!
Tehee little brother huh?
LOL!
Sorry, don't know why that's funnyXD Keep up the good work and progress on this story so far
7349735 It's all good Missy.
Just glad you liked it. 
Hehe Sweetlant. X3
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Lol X3
Someone's been reading Dracula!
By the way, you repeated this paragraph twice:
Also, "might of" is incorrect. it's actually "might have" or might've." That's just the way it sounds.
Can't figure out who the coachpony is supposed to be.
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hehehehe maybe.
Oops!
That actually sounds a lot better.
Nopony!
He's not relevant. 
So Bootyfull
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Hi I love you
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*Sprays her with a spray bottle* calm down Alyssa
lol
*Gives Alyssa hugs*
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Hisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
(Call me cute one more time and I will eat your soul )
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7355656 Hehehehehehee
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*sings: Oh she's a cutie, little boopty-cutie with a little cute batooty, so cute you get diabetes~!*
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Nom
your soul has ben eaten
7355689 I AM ONE WITH DEH HARTWICK
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.... ples
love meh!
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* Throws up
7355801 Hehehe, works every time.
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Curse you
you devil.... your soul tastes like kit Kats
7355839 Haha! *shakes his tush at you* You can't have dis kit kat!!!
7355839 I can dance for you if you like?
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No...just no
7356054 lol
7356076
7356087 aww come on! Look at the dancing Kitty!
