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misskoifishpony


Hello Fluttercord Fans and shipper fans alike! My name is MissKoiFishPony, but you can call me Miss Koi or Missy:) I love My Little Pony, I love to write, I love Fluttercord.

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POTO Alternative Universe/Gender bent version of MLP. On one calm, misty, spring morning, Butterscotch first arrives at L' Opéra de Cheval as their new ballet dancer. But when he hears a mysterious, beautiful yet alluring song underneath the famous opera house...he meets with the one and only...the ghost of the opera house. Cover Art by Saukra on Fimfiction.

Fan Art by InkQuill on Fimfiction/furrynation on Deviantart:
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Chapter 6 (spoilers)
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Comments ( 52 )

Great story so far. Keep up the good work! :heart:

Omgggg this fic is só perfecttt
Really i love thiss.
Your work is cool.
Reader brazilian here.

I love it so far!

A very good start.

I didn't see sympathy and tenderness in the chapter, unless part of the chapter was removed. Anyway its great so far.:heart:

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Don't worry, the song is in chapter:pinkiesmile: It's in italics.
Here's the spot where she sings it

Despite this depressing thought, Eris's couldn't help but feel the warmth of Butterscotch's wise and compassionate statement. His words had the power to linger in her. His kindness had the power to linger in her heart.

She sweetly sang to herself...

Loveliness, Tenderness,

Warm as the summer,

Offer me their embrace.

Friendliness, Gentleness,

Strangers to my life.

They are there in his face.

Goodness, and sweetness,

And kindness,

Abound in his place.

I am in love with the things

that I see in his face.

It's a feeling

I know time

Will never erase...

I just changed the lyrics a little to fit Eris and the plot of the story. I'm sooo glad that you're enjoying my so far:heart: Thank you for reading and favoriting and reviewing it.

Comment posted by TotallyNotASpy deleted Apr 4th, 2015

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What do you mean by "Objection! It's Saturday!"?

why have I not read this before

you even have Dopey in here to this is fantastic but why is he a hunch back plot convenience

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He's a hunchback in reference to Disney's Hunchback of Notre Dame and to the fanfic "Opera Phantom Discord", plus it was my way to spice up the story and Dopey's character. Thank you thank you so much for favoriting my story and reviewing it:heart:

no this can not end hear moar i need moar plz

p.s. for the convenience for me when/if you reply next click on the random green letters in youre comment so i know you responded last time i didnt get youre message dont know if it was you me fim just a suggestion

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Dear DJ-col7,
Don't worry, Chapitre Seize is not the last chapter. There is more to come, I'm taking a temporary and short break from it in order to finish my short Fluttercord story "The Mare Who Became Queen". You are free to check it out on my fan fiction account, I go by the same author name misskoifishpony. Thank you for enjoying, reviewing, and favoriting my story:twilightsmile:
:heart: Miss Koi

5973715 hey i got the message this time and i understand

Okay, here’s my thoughts on this chapter:

First things first, let’s look at the major part of any Phantom adaptation: The Unmasking
I was curious to see how you were going to handle that considering it’s an important part of any PotO adaptation. One thing I noticed that differs between this one and the original novel is the trust between the characters. After learning that the teacher she thought was an angel was actually a man who had been stalking her and lying to her, Christine tore off his mask to see the face of this voice she once believed she could trust. Interestingly enough—before she unmasked him herself—Christine does demand that he take off his mask, to which he informs her that she’ll never see his face, but gives her no reason why.

Butterscotch, on the other hand, knows at least a bit about Eris and why she wears a mask. And as far as I remember, they never really got onto the subject of whether or not touching the mask is off-limits. Though I can see why Butterscotch might think it was ok to unmask her, I sort of wonder why he would feel the need to if he already knows what’s behind the mask.

Still, that aside, I think the actual unmasking worked well, and I can’t say I’ve ever seen it played out like that quite before.

Now onto the steamier parts:
Steamy scene is steamy. Still, I’m glad they didn’t go all the way, as I prefer that sort of thing to be saved until after marriage. I find it much more romantic that way. (*chuckles* Reading a lot of Robin Jones Gunn in your impressionable teen years will do that.) And I have to say that when it comes to being in love, Eris and Butterscotch in this story are certainly a lot quicker on the uptake than Fluttershy and Discord are in mine.

whens this story going to end

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Why, getting bored already?:raritywink: Lol:derpytongue2: Um, based on my estimation, it should end around 25th chapter mark or at most 30. I'm not sure yet.

jgcbjhavs dbczvdj,,jkhvcd,jhv ,j WAT

Somepony goanna get in trouble after this mess.

Oh my god Koi! :pinkiegasp: This is amazing! You have such great descriptive detail here! Nothing's really happened yet but I can already feel the emotional weight of this story! :fluttercry::pinkiehappy::heart: God! "Buckle up kids we're in for a ride!"

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Oh my goodness, thank you!:raritystarry:
The detail compliment says alot coming from the author who put so much details in their own story:raritywink: Wow, you can already feel the emotional weight, yes I bring on the feels!:yay: Haha lol yes you did the chandelier scene from the movie, love it and thank you:heart::twilightsmile: Hopefully the rest of the chapters captivate you just like the first chapter did and hopefully continue in the detail quality as well. Anyway, have fun reading the chapters while I work on the next chapter update :twilightblush:

How I picture Eris's singing voice sounding like this:

GOD!!! The cuteness is real! :rainbowkiss: Butters and Eris are so frickin' cute together! :rainbowkiss::heart:

MMMMmmmmm..... So many nostalgic moments here from the Opera Phantom Discord! :rainbowkiss::heart:

But... why is Zicoro looking so pissed? :rainbowderp:

Awwww, Butters and Eris are writing each other love letters now. :rainbowkiss::trollestia:

Oooooohhh! Eris gotta a date! Butterscotch and Eris sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Haha lol!

First comes love, then comes marriage, then comes all the little foals in the baby carriage! :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::pinkiecrazy::heart:

You know? If I was in Butters position, I think I would have reacted the same. X3

Duh fudge just happened there at the end? :derpyderp1:

MMMmmmmmm! X3 ITS. TOO. CUTE. XD

"Her name was Christine. She was so pure and pristine. I loved her, but...she did not love me. To her, we were just friends...that's all we could ever be. She was an angel and she played like one too. She was in L'Opera de Cheval's orchestra...with the conductor Monsieur Charles La Rue. She loved Charles La Rue, but he was shallow...selfish...and crude. He loved her only for her beauty...and wanted to take away her purity. One night, in the orchestra pit with no light...Charles defiled...my pristine Christine. I heard her screams and cries. I ran to her side. The police took him and locked him away for good. But this left Christine with child,...and her delivery was far too soon."

Zircoro gazed away from the picture and looked at Butterscotch with tears in his eyes, "Butterscotch...that baby was you."

O_O

....

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I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS AND SO MANY EMOTIONS RIGHT NOW!

Eris whispered with tenderness in her voice "Sweet dreams Butterscotch."

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Okay... that was sweet.

Why do I have the feeling shits going to hit the fan real soon? XD

Could it be? Could it be that...I am in...? No! It can't be! I can't be in love! If I fall in love with him, and tell of him of my feelings, he'll...

almost tears... impressive

Eris was hypnotized by the way he danced to the music, it was like he was singing with his body. In that moment, her deepest wish was to dance with him.

Looks like Eris would like to have their bodies sing a duet together. :raritywink::trollestia:

She whispered sweetly "C'mon my dearest, you can do it."

:rainbowkiss::heart:

How I hear Butter's singing:

"Even though operas aren't the coolest thing in my book, your performance made them...ten percent cooler."

Just ten percent? :raritywink:

Eris whispered into his ear "I know a way you can make it up to me."

Awwwwww yeeeaaaahh! :trollestia::rainbowkiss::heart:

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Butterscotch could soon feel Eris's breath getting closer...and closer...to his mouth.

Yes, yes, YES~!:raritystarry:

Before he could react to it...there was a knock on the door.

Damn it! :twilightangry2::facehoof:

Why is Elusive such a drama king? X3

...oh wait. :P

CRASH!
Dust consumed the stage. Pieces of old wood were everywhere. Silence filled the area surrounding the stage. Everypony in the orchestra pit, on stage and back stage struggled to see what landed harshly upstage. Everypony coughed and tried to blow away the dust consuming the air.
When Butterscotch was finally able to catch his breath and refocus his eyes, he saw a grey stone statute on stage. He took some hesitant steps towards the statute. He saw that it was a statute of a stallion...with short edgey hair...and wings...
Butterscotch gasped in horror and covered his mouth with his hooves. He backed away from the statute with terror and tears in his eyes.
It was Rainbow Blitz...

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What?..... What?..... What?!..... :pinkiegasp::applecry::applejackconfused::applecry::fluttercry::raritydespair::applejackconfused::fluttercry:

No.... no.... just.... just no.... Eris. Eris! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!!!???

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Missy... why? :fluttercry:

Missy... your hurting my heart. :fluttercry:

Eris... Eris please!... :fluttershysad::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttercry::raritydespair:

You have a very nice writing style. I look forwards to reading this story. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Paradox the Wierdo deleted Aug 19th, 2016

Ship :heart: Ship :heart: Ship :heart: Ship :heart: Ship :heart: Ship :heart: Ship :heart: Ship :heart:

6225590 sorry about that I wondering how this will end

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