• Member Since 27th May, 2018
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KG1945


I love stories, seriously I would make the most random stories in my head. Now I have a place to write them.

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An evil captain of the world's most feared pirates of the seven seas is after the treasure of an ancient temple. With the help of a young maiden on the search for her lost father. Will the theives get their gold? Will family drama get in the way? Love? Let's see how the ocean prepares our unique travelers.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Interesting. I hope to see what happens next.

Thanks so much! I hope that I'll have time to continue soon. In case anyone is wondering Blueblood's personally is based on the story 'The Opera Phantom Discord'. It is one of my favorite stories, and his character is kinda based on that exect it'll be a little different. And this first chapter was just to lead up to our heros, which will come in the 2nd and 3rd chapter! Enjoy, and remember this is my first story so don't expect it to be "professionally" written.

I love your idea for this story and your writing is great. However, I have one suggestion and that is just to simply keep an eye on your grammar and spelling. Great story though, can't wait for more!

Thank you for your comment and I will try and triple check my spelling, which I somehow keep forgetting.

It is a good story. I agree, though about the spelling and grammar. I am definitely going to follow it.

Wow! Great so far, I love where this is heading and can't wait to read more! This is such a great idea for a story!

Keep writing my friend. Keep writing.:ajsmug:

I Like your story so far! I can't wait for the Main Characters to show up! have a nice day/night and remember to take care of yourself!

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