King Sombra and queen Celestia had a child called Fluttershy a few months after Discord was banished. And Discord won't rest until he has his revenge!
BTW This is my first story EVER so I'm sorry if it turns out bad..
But I hope u enjoy this anyway yay! 
send comments, fav, etc. THANK U!!! 
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I haven't read the story yet, But.. Why was Fluttershy born from Sombra and Celestia?
I will add this to my list for stories, i'll read later.
I have to say I know its your first story , but It needs some work.
Your grammar's okay, except you might want to have fragmented sentences. Your spelling, however, needs work. It's an interesting storyline, but you could stand to put a little more detail into it to add suspense and evoke emotion in your readers.
6183873 yeah its not great i know, but i'm going to edit it today. thax for pointing those out!
And... OMG UR READING IT AHHHHHH!!!! 
1st: Like the story so far.
"Not a cliffhanger." 
"Right when it was getting good."
2nd: My reaction & how I felt when the chapter was finished.
3rd: I can't wait to read more.
6182521 I like the ship celestia x sombra and I thought it was a good idea. Is that ok?
6184710 YAY!!! Glad u enjoyed!
6182535 Iv'e edited it an d re-posted it. Hopefully it's better. stupid me!
6185110 re-read it again I see some mistakes that are the same and some were correct.
no need to worry. I know its your first story writing. Maybe if you want I could help you with your story, if you don't mind?
6185431 Thanks for the offer but I think i'll be ok.
(Not trying to be offensive) But I hope you enjoy anyway! 
6189050 alright then. At least I asked
I wonder did Discord try to overthrow Queen Celestia and King Sombra because he's evil or because they didn't treat him equally.
Good so far!!
Even though the chapters are a little short, I very much am enjoying this!!!! Good work!!
There's a few spelling errors, but I love it so far!!!!!
LOVING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This reminds me of "Bride of Discord".
Great so far!!!!!! Please continue!!!!!!!
6190679 a bit of both
6197655 YAY!!! I'm glad your liking it so far!
Thank u!! 
Hmm… I guess Angel isn't in the mood to be sympathetic. At least she can count on Applejack to cheer her up.
It's okay! I'm a very patient dracon. Plus, you'll get a lot of time to think about the story. But just a word of advise, if you have a public library in your area, there might be computers in there.
The chapters are a little short and there are a few spelling errors, but I'm really enjoying the story.
This is pretty good, it reminds me of Bride Of Discord. However, there are a lot of spelling mistakes and I'm starting to loose interest. I know that this is your first story, and we all have to start somewhere. I actually removed my first story because of how bad it was. This has a lot of potential, and I'll still be reading it. Good luck.
Just a suggestion, you might want to tag the story as Alternate Universe.
chapters are a bit short although it's short in total so far... How ever
it's decent 6/10
The story has good potential. The chapters need to be a bit longer but the content is good.
I absolutely love this! Please continue!
I'll certainly wait! I'm enjoying this very much.
6184837 YES I love that ship too! I love the story, but if you can make your chapters a little longer, that would be great! Keep writing it, I'm intrigued.
Again if you can make the chapters a bit longer, that would be great! You grammar is pretty decent and the contents are lovely. I hope to continue this story soon!
6397685 Don't worry I have!
You are doing great, write more! It was great seeing Flutershy sing God Help the Outcasts!
Wait... I thought Discord had done the stuff before this chapter because, not only did he want revenge on Celestia, but because he wanted fluttershy to be his... as in like try to force her into marying him... I guess I was wrong and misunderstood.
I still like this though 
she is so adorable.
Also YAY! Derp Horse!
Keep up the good work!
Can you uncansul it please its so good
I'm so sorry guys, but I have a lot of studying to do now I'm in yr 10.(wow I sound like Twilight!
) Maybe I'll come back to it I'm not sure, but thank u for all the support u guys are awesome!! 
Cancelled?!!!, noooo i need more!!!
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Oh. So that is why. Why not put it on "on hiatus" then? That gives you time to take a break, get such things like school stuff out of the way. Your fans would wait patiently.
Please continue! I would offer to help with it, but I don't trust my writing skills.
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Why did Fluttershy say Goodnight Daddy?
Great story by the way!
6518907 she was half asleep. I wanted to do like a really awkward but cute thing between them. Im glad u like the story chapter 9 is coming soon!
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Okay, thanks! I can't wait for Chapter 9!
why do I get the feeling that this Is based on the beauty and the beast
This is a really good story in my opinion. Please write more.
Good chapter!!!! By the way, it's spelled "ponies", not "ponys."
6552813 is that a good thing or bad?
6555668 ok thanks! :)
6554364 Aww thanks!
6556022 no idea