Discord's best friend Fluttershy is sick… and to Discord, she's more than a friend. He always knew this day would come, he hates being immortal. This is why he wanted to have friends in the first place. But... Was this friendship worth it? The bond of love between them won't die… right?
Did you get that idea from me?
6448369 Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaybeeeeeeeeee.......
One word to describe this: Beautiful...
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6448384 Aww~ thank you!
XD you and your memes
6448371 You should also add this to the Fluttercord Group. So, more people can read it.
6448400 Good idea! I'm going to do that right now
That was so sweet! I'm going to check out your other stuff, when I get the chance.
6448437 Aww, thank you! I'd recommend Angel Kisses and its sequel Father's Day if you want more like this.
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I'm a bit confused. He's being counted alongside the heroes, but he's also banished?
The emotional aspects are great, but I honestly had a little trouble keeping up with the war and Sombra and all that.
6489441 It's because of his magical abilities. At the end he realizes that the end in order to save Equestria he must use his chaos powers to make everything better. However, Twilight didn't consider that so she banished him to be safe than sorry.
6489501 I understand. This was originally a short one-shot (also I meant it to be one long chapter but to be apart of the contest it had to have 3) so I didn't put too much detail into the war since it was mostly focused on Fluttercord instead.
6489441 Due to his chaotic magic, they can't risk him being in Equestria during the war.
Oooomyyyyyyyggaaaawwed I crying
6760407 Heh, glad you enjoyed.
That's a sad story, even though it is short, I even cried!
6764723 Don't feel bad, I cried too. Glad you liked it. ^^
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Yeah your right, and also Merry Christmas
6764737 Merry Christmas ^^
I have to be honest. Initially I didn't want to read this due to the next issues I had:
1. I'm not a fan of Fluttercord. I tolerate the ship but I'm not a fan.
2. The concept of Discord dealing with Fluttershy's passing is nothing new at this point.
3. I read "Forever Young" and "Bride of Discord" before this one, so the problems got bigger.
I was wrong. Very wrong.
I think adding Sombra to the mix makes this more intriguing because now there's a reason for them to being apart and I like the idea of Discord not seeing Fluttershy again until the war is over, this makes the drama more interesting. And the "Can I kiss you?" Brilliant.
7143437 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Beautiful story!
7252993 Thank you!
7252994 No problem! ^^
6764753 It was a interesting concept, but I found some issues with it. For starters, Discord is the most powerful being in Equestia, his reality bending powers should have protected him from anything Sombra could throw at him. Tirek only defeated Discord after draining all the magic of Equestria aside from Twilights, so the notion that Sombra could do the same. My next problem is the fact that Discord did not cure Fluttershy, if his Chaos could save Equestria like he stated then that would mean it would have the power to undo the magic. Discord isn't stupid and would have though of that the moment he saw Fluttershys condition. And even if he could not take away the magic, he could replace it with his magic, turning Equestria into a chaotic wonderland for the sake of Expelling Sombras magic before reverting it back to the way it was.