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Vanilla Mocha


I enjoy ponies. I enjoy coffee. I enjoy writing. So therefore, this pegasister enjoys FimFiction.

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All Twilight wanted was to get the cure for the cutie pox. Another little foal was busy trying to get their cutiemark, and like Apple Bloom's incident last year, they did it the wrong way. Now on her way to visit Zecora, Twilight and Spike get on topic of the different species of Equestria. When they arrive at Zecora's hut, the whole conversation takes a turn as the zebra adds a bit of her own knowledge -- and two cents -- to what they were discussing.

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i like it....nice and funny:twilightsmile:

What the!!! Zecora can talk normal?!!! :pinkiegasp: Plot twist!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

7203610 :scootangel: Also, the fact that the whole existence of this story isn't even real. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

7203613 Ooh you're right! Also, how'd you know this would've been something I'd do?

Okay, this was a fun little read. It felt a bit rushed, but as random comedy, it may be allowed to be so.
Only... one thing:

"And dang, constantly rhyming is hard, but making them believe in something as stupid as seabras made it worth it."

Vanilla Mocha Pie, I think you just broke the universe. I have the headcaonon that Zecora´s rhyming is essential for the stability of Equus and the entire Multiverse, and you just broke it :rainbowlaugh:

Besides that, I always found the idea of only ponies having cutiemarks interesting. (According to Fausticorn, their full name is zebra ponies btw, might explain the cutie mark:twilightsmile:)

7203796 Thanks! :scootangel:

(XD ohhh! Cool! That DOES make sense!)

Joking Zecora isn't too out of character, though she would never go that far.

7204892 I agree. Though I think it'd be nice to see her have a comical side. :twilightsmile:

7204959 More of "pranking" than "comical".

Spike jumped on Twilight's back and she took off into the forest. Zecora chuckled and watched them from her hut. "Young Spike was gullible, Twilight was tough; But when it comes to joking with ponies, there's never enough. And dang, constantly rhyming is hard, but making them believe in something as stupid as seabras made it worth it."

:rainbowlaugh:

Well, that was amusing, and it's nice to see a variation of Zecora that's just a bit mischievous.

7457612 Glad you enjoyed ^D^

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