(Note: This story was written by my two sisters, with me taking down notes. (R) is 10, and (T) is 6. There are a lot more fart jokes than I anticipated. Also, when reading this story you will come across footnotes. The story will not make sense if you don't read them, but due to FIMFiction regulations I couldn't simply insert them in the relevant location.
The following is simply the girls.)
Me: I need a description to put on the main page. Can you come up with one?
R: Sure
(R) Where Spike runs away, because Twilight thought he farted.
Ahh, the subtle insanity of a child is truly something to preserve. Good job! Unfortunately, I don't have any siblings young enough to write from.
Aww! You're a better brother than I am a sister...
I was lost pretty much the whole time, but I wanna write a story like this with my younger brother! It will be awesome!
I think Rarity said it best.
At first I was like What?
Then I was like : What the heck did I just read?
This was both hilarious and confusing. Kudos to your sisters.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAAAHA HAAAAAAAA.
I think the notes are just as funny as the story.
You should keep this and bring it out to show them when they are older. I say you made a really good memory with them.
Good job all three of you.
This makes about as much sense as the make-believe I played with my sis when we were younger.
It's so glorious.
That is the best reason ever!!!
The fact that you submitted a story written by your sisters tells me a lot. Namely:
1. You're crazy
2. You're an excellent sibling
I try to find more fart fetish stories, and run across this. I'll read it anyway cause comedy. Oh, and I like Spike.
Omg i'm crying
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You need to get your sisters to tell more stories. This was hilarious!
Added to "The Art of the Fart" and "Everybody Poops!"
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What?
This was glorious! Have a like and a fave. Heck, I'll even throw in a follow! You should write with your sisters more.
I love your sisters.
...Dafuq?
The feels!
Say "Dr. Eyeball", and I think Monoculus.
I laughed! I cried! I crossed my eyes! Two thumbs up! Whatever thumbs are.