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I enjoy ponies. I enjoy coffee. I enjoy writing. So therefore, this pegasister enjoys FimFiction.

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(Prequel to Pegasus Feathers)
Apple Bloom has been avoiding her friends all throughout the new school year. Is there more to her story than what meets the eye, or has something drastic really happened to her?
WARNING: Spoiler Alerts To Those Reading Pegasus Feathers.

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A good prequel, I like how you worked Babs in there, glad to here she got the bullies off her tail back home! Lookign forward to the story that comes after this! ^^

WARNING: Spoiler Alerts To Those Reading Pegasus Feathers.

So...Pegasus Feathers is listed as a sequel to this, yet you warn that this story contains spoilers for its own sequel? What?

(Edited to add quote.)

6776765 Yeah... Sorry about it being confusing. See, they go hand in hand. The story itself takes place before Pegasus Feathers, while being a backstory, it holds info that explains a few things in PF. They're spoilers that explain Apple Bloom's behavior, and why her personality changed suddenly in my story. I thought she would seem out of character if I didn't explain. :twilightsheepish:

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That sounds like the opposite of what "spoilers" usually means. Why are you warning readers away from information we apparently need?

Since the story is short, and apparently doesn't stand on its own, have you considered just merging it into Pegasus Feathers as a flashback or prologue, at whatever point is appropriate?

6777971 It contains minor spoilers. And since PF itself is very long, I decided to make it seperate, not to mention PF can still be understood without this story.

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So I should read PF first (once it's finished, at least)?

6778087 If you want to. It could go either way. Honestly, Pegasus Feathers isn't my best story, and I took it in from another author (Blu_Ray) halfway through. That's when I had the idea to write this story. However you prefer your backstories, that is what I would say. Personally, I'd read this first.

Well... I like it. Its a good prequel(have read other story). I be lying if I didn't say this was pretty good.

7621780 It makes me wonder how they(or this story) didn't get on Equestria daily though:rainbowhuh:

7622029 *shrugs* I might try again with one of my newer stories. :)

7622094 Well, I wish you luck

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