chapter 7: The search begins
Celestia was still crying lying in her bed it was 13 minutes ago they had lost their daughter, but it felt like an eternity to her. Sombra watched sadly. Watching his wife like this was unbearable, of course he was very upset losing his daughter as well, but what could they do. Suddenly Sombra had an idea he walked down to the servant's chambers and knocked on a door.
"Miss Sparkle? ... Miss Sparkle I need to talk to you." Sombra said
Suddenly Sombra could hear hoofsteps and banging inside, he was about to let himself in when a purple unicorn swung open the door looking tired and a bit crazy.
" WHAT!? Oh, I'm sorry your majesty I didn't reli- "
Sombra put his hoof up silencing Twilight.
"It's ok Twilight I know you're busy with your studies, and I understand perfectly. But right now I need you and your friends to help me find my daughter."
Twilight smiled and bowed.
" I'll go find them right away." She said shutting her door. But before she walked away she said. " By the way, I am deeply sorry for your loss." She smiled sadly then she walked down the hallway.
Sombra smiled then sighed, he just hoped he wasn't too late. A few minutes later Sombra was sitting in a meeting room with Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow dash, Pinkie pie and Rarity.
"I have called you all here to help me. As you all know my daughter has been foalnapped.."
The 5 looked down sadly and Pinkie started crying.
" sniff I know!! I know!! What are we going to do-hoo-hoo!!! Sniff.
Everyone looked towards her and gave her a hug, hoping to calm her down. But she was crying louder.
Sombra looked down as well, he had thought of of trying to get fluttershy back, but how? He didn't have a clue where Discord lived. Well he knows he lives in the Everfree forest somewhere but that was about it... Suddenly he thought of an idea.
" Everypony please calm down, I have an idea."
Everyone was suddenly quite.
" Good, now this is what we're going to...."
After Sombra explained the plan they all cheered. And Sombra smiled, maybe he will get his daughter back soon.
"Alright, everypony understand the plan?"
They all nodded
"Then, we travel at dawn."
They all cheered again and Sombra smiled, hopefully they'll find her.
Yay chapter 7! BTW guys in the summer I cant post any chapters because my computer broke at home and I have to use the school computers. 
So I'm going to try to do 1 chapter a day this week, sorry!! 
But as soon as summers over I'll start doing more chapters ok? Again.. SORRY!!!!! 
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It's okay! I'm a very patient dracon. Plus, you'll get a lot of time to think about the story. But just a word of advise, if you have a public library in your area, there might be computers in there.
Just a suggestion, you might want to tag the story as Alternate Universe.
chapters are a bit short although it's short in total so far... How ever
it's decent 6/10
The story has good potential. The chapters need to be a bit longer but the content is good.
I'll certainly wait! I'm enjoying this very much.
Again if you can make the chapters a bit longer, that would be great! You grammar is pretty decent and the contents are lovely. I hope to continue this story soon!
Dun Dun Dunn... again awesome (: