Celestia and Sombra ruled peacefully in Canterlot with their daughters, that is until they are attacked and overthrown by a creature named Discord who separates all five of their daughters. But he soon learns of a 6th princess. What will happen to each of the daughters? Will the princesses find a way back to each other?
Cover art By: Fiona Rose. Thank you so much for making this.
REWRITE IN THE WORKS!
I started this story when I was younger and new to writing. It was on a whim and written without any edits made after... yeah... So, I stopped writing. But, after fleshing out the story and really spending time to figure it out, I am happy to say the rewrite has been published for your reading pleasure! Please go give some love to A New Fairy Tale! It would mean the world!
That was AWESOME!
Oh......my......,gosh..,,this sounds awesome and it had an awesome story so far! Keep writing and ignore the dislikes! Omg! I love this! I just can't wait for the next chapter!
I have to say it's a okay story,but I want to say some slightly thing could possibly be wrong .but hey I can't complain its your first story I'll give it a fav.
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5955569 I will have it up ASAP.
Thia is getting really good and I can't wait for the next chapter! The only thing wrong is there is just a couple spelling mistakes here and there but it's fine! Loving it!
5958373 Thanks and I am not verry good at editing, and my phone that I use to type this has no auto correct.
I hope to have the next chapter up today or tomorrow of sometime soon. No promises though.
EEEK!!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!!!! This is a great story so far!!!!
I love this story! Keep going!
I'm loving the plot for this story!
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The story is turning out well. I spotted two misspellings but other than that, you are doing great!
Oh my gosh!! I thought you'd forgotten about this story. I'm so glad that's not the case. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
6268200 There is no way I would forget abbout this story!
I was just really busy
I'm excited to see what Sunset shimmer has to do with this. Also, is there gonna be more Discord in the next chapter? :D
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Discord wont be in the next chapter but mabye the one after... actually the next three chapters wont have Discord... I think.
SPOILER sortof
I dont know what role sunset will play in this but I mayy have her be the one who reunites the mane 6 minus fluttershy.
hmm..... so, you're a ghost is you're name by any chance Frank?
6373491 Nope.
why'd yah ask?
6373542 meh family ghost
I was wondering what happened to Rarity. Hahaha. Good chapter. :D
Very cute chapter. :D
In terms of spelling errors, there is room for improvement, but I'm hooked to the story!!
Not bad, but you are in desperate need of a proof reader
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500G: SHIP EVERYONE (5/6)
This is as fast paced as a Call of Duty game and you still need a proof-reader
The main idea is good anyway, that's why I'm still here
Gotcha! Fluttershy's new friend is your OC with another name
That made me laugh
Happy Birthday!
This was a sweet chapter, and I almost expected something to happen when Pinkie seemed to recognise Fluttershy.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
This story is absolutely adorable, I love how you're doing it, but....you may need somebody to proof read these before hand, because there are a bunch of spelling errors, that don't quite make sense. If you need someone to help, I'll be more than happy to! But besides that, this story is really good!
6515770 Thanks! I know there are alot of gramar errors. I would love to have you be my proof reader.
I'm not really sure how to do that while thing with sending it to someone so they can read it beforehand but if you know then you can be my proofreader.
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You could try Private Messaging the next chapter to me, and I could read over it and I could tell you all the spelling and grammar mistakes, and then after you edit it, you publish it!
6516215 Yah, that would work. Good Idea, I'll do that.
?You two have been plannong this little borulenteer trip for months!?"
Volunteering and planning btw love this ^^
Please tell us what happens next! Will there be a romance between Fluttershy and Discord?
6751376 You shall see
Don't want to sound impatient, but I really want to see what happens next in the story. I'm at the edge of my seat!
Why did you cancel it?????
6773164 We rather not, considering that you killed this...
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I'm so sorry for canceling. It just wasn't going right. I promise I am working on a re-wright that should be out soon... I hope
7406373 It's alright it is your story anyway
7406373 Glad to know that you're aware that this idea has potential
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