A Pegasister who enjoys creativity, imagination, and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Fluttershy's unfortunate mishap with the Vampire Fruit Bats has made her even more immune to manipulation... or so we thought. Equestria is in danger when a dangerous draconequus seduces the innocent and sucks their blood. But this creature seems to have a fond eye for Fluttershy. Will Fluttershy tame this creature or will she fall prey to his dark, roguish charms? MLP meets Dracula... or in this case, Discordula
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This is written very, very well. I read it all straight through last night, but then I needed sleep, so I put off the review until now. Your characterization is excellent, and your incorporation of all the Mane 6 and Spike in the story, despite it being mostly about Fluttershy, is really great and appreciated. Your emphasis on the importance of friendship is also refreshing, as sometimes it is forgotten in romance that indeed, friendship is important as well. Your plot is also intriguing, with the concept of the "bridesmaids" and bride. It's original and creative, in my mind. I'd love to know more about Discordula himself, though. I'm sure you'll reveal that in time, of course. I'm glad you didn't just make him a vampire, but still a chaos lord. Very nice!
There are a few things I'd like to suggest, though. Instead of putting certain things the ponies do in parentheses, just write it out. It's more effective, and will make more sense to the readers. Second, I'd like to know why Celestia seems to have changed so much from the bite (she's much crueler) while Rarity still seems very much the same, albeit distracted. Is there a reason for this? It's just a question. But I really enjoyed this thoroughly, and I look forward to more! I hope you get more reviews too.
I'm sure you will. I'll add this to some fluttercord libraries and see if it'll help.
I really like where this is going, please update soon! ^_^
5217933 Thank you so much, taterforlife. I appreciate your full acknowledgement on my story. But what exactly do you mean by "writing out certain things the ponies do rather than in parenthesis?" Could you please send me like, sentence examples if you please, 'cause the way you type in your stories is absolutely amazing and readable. And I would like some demos on how you would type it. Thank you so much!!!!
5217217 Thank you, MerlosTheMad. I really appreciate your generosity, it's just I had another idea on what I think would be a good Cover Art: Taking Over Me, by musapan.deviantart.com I'm really sorry, it's just that I'm not really a big fan of Flutterbat and the reason why is because I love Fluttershy the way she is and not what a spell mishap that Twilight made on her and the Vampire Fruit Bats. My apologies for being so picky, I really do appreciate your support. Thank you very much. Brohoof.
I'm really enjoying myself reading this. The purple prose is really YMMV, but it fits the plot and tone of the story, and I like it. Do go on and keep doing what you're doing.
5218820 Of course I'll point it out, thanks for asking so nicely.
And I'm sorry for writing that and confusing you, but here's what I mean:
That's from your first chapter. Instead of writing "(squeals)", just write it out in a sentence. For example, you could write it like this:
It's not my best example, but I hope that helps! I'm not sure how to write a demo, but feel free to ask me for any tips or pointers. But the best way to learn to write is to simply read books. How do authors write out speech? How do they style paragraphs? Anything on form and grammar you don't always need to learn from lessons or demos. Books have examples all there for you to see. :) But if there's anything you'd like me to help you with, just let me know. Thank you so much for complimenting my writing, too. You're too sweet, I'm so flattered!
It took me a long time to figure out that fanfiction is its own culture with its own style preferences, but you're doing much better than I did when I started. Great job! You'll do just fine. 
You. . . You copied this off of devianart. . .
5225089 No, no, no normalgirlpony. I copied it off of my own documents, not off of Deviantart. My Deviantart username is cartoonprincess91. It's copied off my documents, 'cause I've been trying to submit this story since March before I even applied myself to Deviantart.
5225621 sorry i didnt know it was you (hides)
I was planning on doing this my own characters, but decided not to because it would be difficult and.....strange to write. Nicely done, excited to find out what happens!
This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. *grabs popcorn* Must...keep...reading...
Oh, no...RARITY RUN BACK TO SPIKEY WIKEY!
*grabs popcorn* So good...so good...such a great story...
...Rarity is probably a teensy tiny little bit out of character...but I'm willing to overlook it because Discord is awesome in this story.
Oh, no, not Derpy! NOT DERPY! *dramatic scream*
Wait, where's the next chapter? *searches in vain* WHERE IS IT??
5249896 Because she's under Discordula's thrall, silly filly.
More x8!!!!
this is great!
AWESOME!AND CREEPY!BUT I LIKE CREEPY! YAY! IG IVE YOU FIVE OUT PF FIVE YAYS!
NO, I AM JUST STARTING TO APPRECIATE RARITY A BIT MORE, NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wait, I just realized what Discordula sounds like, oh well
Derp!
Oh Discord so deserves his princess! And Fluttershy deserves him!
Yay. I mean, nooo! Oh Fluttershy, you must away before the villain has you in his clutches.
I hate you because there are only 6 chapters witch were too short
But, I love you because this story is awesome and it is goooood :)
Mor plz
I love Fluttercord! Forever Fluttercord
You're killing me with all this waiting! Update soon!
5361057 Ummmmm...... thank you?
plz keep updateing!
and good job 
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5364318 ...please don't be mad at me...
5364350 im not i just used the wrong face sorry xD
5364350 i fixed it =)
5364375 Oh, okay
Oh my' this is so exciting n cute at the same time makes just...just...SQUEE!!
can't wait for the next update
5369885 Wow, thank you so much. Coming from one of my favorite Fluttercord fanfic authors, that's one of the sweetest compliments I've ever had. Thank you so much!
I've been waiting for an update on this and I loved this new chapter. Hope you update again soon
5376139 Thank you!
All i want for xmass is more chapters
Please update!
I really want to see where you take this story! 
I love all the different roles you give to each character. I can't wait to see what happens when Fluttershy sees "Drake" again! 
I'm also looking forward to when Fluttershy meets Discord/finds out Drake is Discord! 
Keep it up! 
neeeeeeeeedddddddddd mmmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee cccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaapppppppttttttttteeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why, why do you torture us this way? Don't stop, this is awesome sauce.
'She seems to be more lively and spontaneous during the night time hours'
Well she IS the Princess of the Night
Loving this BTW
You're a pony... You're suppose to have two left hooves.
More please
Loving this BTW hope it all ends happy for everypony
*looks at likes* ... Anybody want to tell me why this awesome fic has only 39 likes?! WHY HATH THIS STORY, NOT BEEN SHARED?!?!?! WELL SER/LADY HEART?!?!
Sorry I let out my inner Luna.
5440744 40 Likes. There ya go. Also, UPDATE PLEASE
Please do continue this story!! This is by far the best I have read!
This is my 3rd time asking for you to UPDATE
Up the fupping date pls
